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Quote Core_12 Replybullet Topic: Military profiles
    Posted: 13 July 2005 at 10:58am
Hello all!

My first post. Tread lightly.

So ok I drew some profiles (correct word?) of some characters:

Mechanic girl


Commander


Commander


Sergeant


Lieutnant


The Jelbon Algro 6 XVI Rifle


C+C appriciated ^^



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Quote Citizen_Insane Replybullet Posted: 13 July 2005 at 12:25pm

you know what?  These aren't too bad!

I really like the shading and everything, good job!

The only thing that bothers me, is that there isn't
much balance in the compositions... Like, the poses
don't seem natural enough, you know?

But I like them.  Good use of colors, in my opinion.
Just have to work on natural body compositions and
you'll be set!

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Quote Core_12 Replybullet Posted: 13 July 2005 at 1:21pm
Thanks. Yea the poses are a bit.. hm, should I say, cartoonish? ^^

Added another one.
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Quote So-lou Replybullet Posted: 13 July 2005 at 10:52pm

These are pretty cool. I like the cartoony feel to them. I'd say make them a bit darker all round because they are fairly light and sort of blend together. Just mess with the pallette to up the contrast. My fav is the commander. :D Good job!

 

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Quote kankki Replybullet Posted: 14 July 2005 at 1:39am
Wow! Very nice for the first post here! I have been here for an pretty long time and I just make crap images..
Well, duuuh, I can eat spam if I have to!
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Quote Monstara Replybullet Posted: 14 July 2005 at 5:30am
These are great for first posts!
I myself hesitated for ages before posting, and my pieces were 100 times worse :)
The poses are fine, I only have a little trouble with the first piece, but the rest are great!
Good job, and keep going
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Quote Core_12 Replybullet Posted: 14 July 2005 at 9:36am
Thanks ^^

I'll be making more, and I'll try to put a little more contrast into them.

I drew this guy in the same style. A friend of mine asked me to make a cryomage, but I'm not sure if I got that right lol


That could have a bit more contrast, yes..
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