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Quote BigBeagle Replybullet Topic: A Real Samurai
    Posted: 31 March 2007 at 6:05pm
Hello everyone.  I'm working on making a Samurai (this time for real, no bandits or crap).  With this one, I'm going for a posture where he's just about to draw his sword and start dealing out some violence.  I've just finished the line art for the form of the body and the sword:

I figure in some ways, this is the most crucial part, so I should get some suggestions to ensure I get it right.  So if anyone has any suggestions, fire away.
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Quote Mil Replybullet Posted: 01 April 2007 at 3:13am
I think his right elbow shouldn't be so far at our left.
The position of his right leg doesn't seem good, there's something wrong with his right knee and his right foot.
The torso and left part of his body seem good :)

Sorry for my bad english, I hope you understand me
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Quote BigBeagle Replybullet Posted: 01 April 2007 at 1:18pm
Yeah, I see what you mean.  I'll get working on that.
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