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    Posted: 08 June 2007 at 10:56pm
This is a knight guy for a platforming game.



Something seems off, but I'm not quite sure what.
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Quote Krakatoa Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2007 at 2:40am
The arm is a little thin, and the skirt thingo is a little to protruding. Good, though.
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2007 at 6:49am
a tipical human arm connects to the rest of the body in the upper part of the torso, not in the middle of the chest.
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Quote Agent #1 Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2007 at 7:16am


OK, I changed his shoulders so it looks more like they exist, and I changed his waist a little.
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2007 at 10:12am
nicer, but the side of armor plate on his chest still looks 'over' the arm.
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Quote Agent #1 Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2007 at 1:02pm


OK, I think his pauldron stands out more now, and I added a little width to the arm.

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Playing around with the colors.

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Quote Krakatoa Replybullet Posted: 11 June 2007 at 3:26am
I like the second one. What I see I like, but why the hell would a guy wear a skirt? o.0 Good job, though.

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