Pixel Joint Forum: Ice Cream

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soda
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Topic: Ice Cream
Posted: 30 June 2007 at 6:38pm

Jalonso?

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jalonso
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Posted: 30 June 2007 at 6:44pm

hehe, give me a few minutes.

So notice I changed very little.

Edited by jalonso - 30 June 2007 at 7:18pm

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soda
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Posted: 01 July 2007 at 8:33am

K, worked on them and submitted.

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leel
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Posted: 01 July 2007 at 9:25am

I think you need to work on the... complexity of your pixels.

Everything in your gallery look like quickie practices, and they might be, that's ok. Everyone needs practice, but it's just practices don't really belong in the gallery. You want your absolute best pieces you can put in there. So far you just have extremely simplistic tubular characters, and every time I look at it I just think "ok.. the first was cute, the second is ok... now, let's get to the good stuff eh?"

I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but I think you should start challenging yourself more.

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soda
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Posted: 01 July 2007 at 11:04am

I get your point, Leel. I just started this month so they're not so hot, but after reading comments I've come to realize I have to step it up a bit. No more tubular characters, those are just leading to an up coming scene, thanks for the notice.

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soda Commander Joined: 19 May 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 224	Topic: Ice Cream Posted: 30 June 2007 at 6:38pm
	Jalonso?
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 30 June 2007 at 6:44pm
	hehe, give me a few minutes. So notice I changed very little. Edited by jalonso - 30 June 2007 at 7:18pm
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soda Commander Joined: 19 May 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 224	Posted: 01 July 2007 at 8:33am
	K, worked on them and submitted.
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 01 July 2007 at 9:25am
	I think you need to work on the... complexity of your pixels. Everything in your gallery look like quickie practices, and they might be, that's ok. Everyone needs practice, but it's just practices don't really belong in the gallery. You want your absolute best pieces you can put in there. So far you just have extremely simplistic tubular characters, and every time I look at it I just think "ok.. the first was cute, the second is ok... now, let's get to the good stuff eh?" I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but I think you should start challenging yourself more.
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soda Commander Joined: 19 May 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 224	Posted: 01 July 2007 at 11:04am
	I get your point, Leel. I just started this month so they're not so hot, but after reading comments I've come to realize I have to step it up a bit. No more tubular characters, those are just leading to an up coming scene, thanks for the notice.
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