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Pixofied
Seaman
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Topic: Android
Posted: 20 July 2005 at 1:55pm

Hey, i'm new here...

Don't be too harsh...

Anyway, this was drawn for someone as a request: (Requested no arms aswell...

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Would like too know what you think... I know the left (side) foot is odd, i'm working on that.

He also requested a few animations aswell... So, yea... His/Her Post

EDIT: Colored him in. ->

Edited by Pixofied

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sedgemonkey
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Posted: 20 July 2005 at 1:59pm

Well, you obviously know how to do it.. that run cycle in your avatar is really super.

I actually like the deep knee bend walk. Very interesting. The robot head is a little confusing, but I'm sure it will make sense once you flesh it out. Too bad they requested no arms... they help a walk cycle so much.

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Monstara
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Posted: 21 July 2005 at 12:50am

That's pretty good. You have some jagged lines on the head, but maybe this was your intention anyways. apart from that sedge is right that the cycle is good.

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Pixofied
Seaman
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Posted: 21 July 2005 at 3:12pm

Turns out he doesnt like it... So, i'm now going to have to draw another one. I'm still animating this though, and giving him arms.

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..::Naso::..
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Posted: 21 July 2005 at 9:04pm

Wow, i love the style in witch u do your coloring =D
cant wait to see it walking

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Monstara
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Posted: 22 July 2005 at 12:51am

I actually preferred the outline version, the coloring technique is interesting, but the coloring is way too heavy.

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Aleiav
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Posted: 25 July 2005 at 2:28pm

I think you've got good color contrast but you're using too many olors or dithering too much.

Interesting lineart. Just some color tweaking and I think this could really be rocking. Also, AAing where the metal sticks out from the overall body might help. st0ven has a good overveiw of AAing in a tut if you're not quite sure how to approach it.

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WIP (Work In Progress)
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Pixofied Seaman Joined: 17 July 2005 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Topic: Android Posted: 20 July 2005 at 1:55pm
	Hey, i'm new here... Don't be too harsh... Anyway, this was drawn for someone as a request: (Requested no arms aswell... ) > Would like too know what you think... I know the left (side) foot is odd, i'm working on that. He also requested a few animations aswell... So, yea... His/Her Post EDIT: Colored him in. -> Edited by Pixofied
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 20 July 2005 at 1:59pm
	Well, you obviously know how to do it.. that run cycle in your avatar is really super. I actually like the deep knee bend walk. Very interesting. The robot head is a little confusing, but I'm sure it will make sense once you flesh it out. Too bad they requested no arms... they help a walk cycle so much.
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Monstara Commander Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: Bulgaria Online Status: Offline Posts: 179	Posted: 21 July 2005 at 12:50am
	That's pretty good. You have some jagged lines on the head, but maybe this was your intention anyways. apart from that sedge is right that the cycle is good.
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Pixofied Seaman Joined: 17 July 2005 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 21 July 2005 at 3:12pm
	Turns out he doesnt like it... So, i'm now going to have to draw another one. I'm still animating this though, and giving him arms.
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..::Naso::.. Commander Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200	Posted: 21 July 2005 at 9:04pm
	Wow, i love the style in witch u do your coloring =D cant wait to see it walking
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Monstara Commander Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: Bulgaria Online Status: Offline Posts: 179	Posted: 22 July 2005 at 12:51am
	I actually preferred the outline version, the coloring technique is interesting, but the coloring is way too heavy.
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 25 July 2005 at 2:28pm
	I think you've got good color contrast but you're using too many olors or dithering too much. Interesting lineart. Just some color tweaking and I think this could really be rocking. Also, AAing where the metal sticks out from the overall body might help. st0ven has a good overveiw of AAing in a tut if you're not quite sure how to approach it.
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Topic: Android