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    Posted: 28 July 2005 at 2:53pm

That's my golem and I need some critique on how to make it more detailed and look more finished.

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Quote Garage Inc. Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2005 at 4:56pm
The problem is, it looks flat. There arn't any darker areas on the lighter parts of the guy. There is no depth to it. The crystals look great, but the actual rock part needs more depth added to it.
For every second spent wondering if you can do something, you could spend 2 seconds doing it.
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Quote Zoomrix Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2005 at 11:07pm
Yup, got the same responce on the gallery with two comments. I will work on the depth and texture of the rocks later on. Dang it! I should've posted this on today. Oh well.
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Quote Saiklor Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2005 at 11:09pm
you've got lightsource inconsistancies.
please post an image containing where the lightsource was meant to be (give us a little dot or a sun or something) so I can know where to begin...
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Quote Zoomrix Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2005 at 3:04pm

I guess I should quote myself for people to see more clear.

I will work on the depth and texture of the rocks later on.

SOrry to sound like a lazy arse but I've actually started on another project and got a lot of things going on. (gotta study for my permit test that's next month)

 
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Quote TACW Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2005 at 6:38pm

I like him. Umm try doing something more around where his neck should be, it looks so plain..

About the permit, I know what you mean. XD Gah that is such a pain, may I ask what state you are in. Pa here myself.



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Quote Zoomrix Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2005 at 7:07pm
I'm in CO. And could someone please close this topic since it's pointless to have people posting here without me providing any updates. Thanks.
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