Yes the eye ey? Had my doubts about it myself.
How's this?

As any decent gangster, he often gets into saloon-style fights!

Opacus: Looks great, but you've either got a really long neck or some really thin armour. You might want to bring the head down a good ways.

Sure it's a mess, the only question is if it's a good mess.

Readability issues around the mouth (it looks like I have a massive underbite rather than goatee) and I still haven't really done anything with the body.

I know this is a dumb question, but can I have more than one enrty??

thug-inc is proof of it, he got 4 medals on the bad palette challenge thing :)

?


Edited by Opacus - 14 November 2007 at 11:18am

Here's mine so far:

XD of course.

Update:




Anything left for me to add? :/

Added a moon, I think that filled up the gap. ^^

with such an action-packed life, no wonder he's getting old so fast

Double post is allowed if you have update I hope? :0

@Metaru ... Really cool lineart, but the colours just don't grab me.

I'm very desapointed cause I have no idea for the challenge, and if I have one, I won't be able to finish it in time...so you'll probably see my participation, AFTER the challenge. good luck to everyone.
Aw I forgot to critique...
Tocky : you should put more colors, and more details with those colors
Opacus : you've really improved your skills last times ! You have really you own style now. The BG bring a great ambiance in the piece
Metaru : I agree with Krysis, the lines are really cool. The idea and the expression of the face are great.

Finished the critique, sorry for my english, and for my critique ><



Edited by FrostPumpkin - 15 November 2007 at 9:40am

Please post image :p

I'm gonna use this picture for the challenge, maybe start tomorrow.


Great entries so far!

i was going to use helms approach to his spartan, same thing.
the canvas is too darn small.

WIP!
How About now?

that's because you have to look beyond a square and two circles. its a caricature after all :P, probably how I often tend to draw myself.


Edited by Metaru - 16 November 2007 at 4:10am

Here is my entry for the challenge:
And WIP:

my entry.

and wip.

a loophole I believe.

ok, i have a new wip, and i dont want to continue if no one likes it, or im doing it wrong. should i continue?

At pregnant cow:
It's really to early to like it or not, but you should continue it anyway in my opinion, whether or not we like it initially (you may improve it based on crits I guess). Art is all about realizing a vision, and if you're working towards something that YOU want to make then I think you should do it :P