Pixel Joint Forum: Game Mock-Up

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   Here is the actual mock-up.

Here is all the extra things and other pieces that arn't in this scene.

I'm not actually making a game out of this, it was really just to improve my pixeling skills.
Any crits or comments are greatly appreciated and wanted.
Some of the things in the second image arn't going to be used, but I made them first and they were to big.  
Thanks to anyone who comments on these.

Edited by Garage Inc.

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Garage Inc. Commander Joined: 20 October 2021 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 318	Topic: Game Mock-Up Posted: 01 August 2005 at 9:05pm
	Here is the actual mock-up. Here is all the extra things and other pieces that arn't in this scene. I'm not actually making a game out of this, it was really just to improve my pixeling skills. Any crits or comments are greatly appreciated and wanted. Some of the things in the second image arn't going to be used, but I made them first and they were to big. Thanks to anyone who comments on these. Edited by Garage Inc.
	For every second spent wondering if you can do something, you could spend 2 seconds doing it.
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Monstara Commander Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: Bulgaria Online Status: Offline Posts: 179	Posted: 02 August 2005 at 12:35am
	A few things: First it is very small, but I guess that's ok. Second the monster/whatever does not stand out enough from the background. Add some brigther/lighter colours to it. I like the cobwebs and the tiles are pretty much ok imo.
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ryan-gfx Commander Joined: 25 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 244	Posted: 02 August 2005 at 12:46am
	It's 'Mock-up' not 'moch-up' and I think this is a good start. It's incredibly tiny though.. looks like it'd be a game to put on a watch or something.
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