Pixel Joint Forum: Unsuspecting (WIP)

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   Okay, my new piece, which needs aloooooot of improvement, I know;) 

The piece is basically showing a person lounging in the middle of an open field, with an unsuspecting UFO shaped like a cloud shooting a beam in the distance, creating a (not yet created) explosion..

What needs improved:
1. Shading/Proportions of Cloud
2. Shading
3. The sky background, as in the light given off by the explosion.
4. Stick person needs to be changed into an actual person or animal (dog?)

I'd really appreciate help and advice!

Thanks in advance!
~Austin

QUICK EDIT:
Explosion Added:

Edited by austin11118 - 06 March 2008 at 6:58pm

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austin11118 Seaman Joined: 02 August 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Topic: Unsuspecting (WIP) Posted: 06 March 2008 at 6:44pm
	Okay, my new piece, which needs aloooooot of improvement, I know;) The piece is basically showing a person lounging in the middle of an open field, with an unsuspecting UFO shaped like a cloud shooting a beam in the distance, creating a (not yet created) explosion.. What needs improved: 1. Shading/Proportions of Cloud 2. Shading 3. The sky background, as in the light given off by the explosion. 4. Stick person needs to be changed into an actual person or animal (dog?) I'd really appreciate help and advice! Thanks in advance! ~Austin QUICK EDIT: Explosion Added: Edited by austin11118 - 06 March 2008 at 6:58pm

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