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    Posted: 28 February 2008 at 7:12pm

EDIT: Sprite arm fixed.

This is the link to the older version so you can compare: http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/30069.htm#c160824
 
 
Hi, I posted this recently on Pixel Joint and now I'm trying to fix it so I can post a better version. This is my edit so far, i'll be glad to take all the advice I can get.
 
I've cleaned up some pixels on the body, re-did the arm-guard to look sharper and have a better shape. Someone told me the elbow was below the belly and had to be above it, so I raised it and made the arm shorter. His elbow though I think might look a bit low still because of the arm guard blocking some details, I'm not sure if I should edit the arm shape or change some shading inside.
 
 
Current Pallete:
I think the contrast on the pallete is okay, but some pointers on making the pallete better would be appreciated. It has 12 colors including background.
 


Edited by MoX - 07 March 2008 at 6:49pm
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Quote basil Replybullet Posted: 06 March 2008 at 2:42pm
Wow, I actually really like this piece. Can you please link your reference(s) though?
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