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Garage Inc.
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Quote Garage Inc. Replybullet Topic: Micro Races
    Posted: 03 April 2005 at 8:14pm

The ones on the left are the new versions, the ones on the right are the old. What do ya'll think?



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Quote Saboteur Replybullet Posted: 03 April 2005 at 8:23pm
honestly, I think you could do better. try show more shape around the edges of the vehicles, have some gleam in the windows... that kind of thing.
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Quote pixelblink Replybullet Posted: 03 April 2005 at 8:44pm
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Quote greyscar Replybullet Posted: 04 April 2005 at 3:52am
yeah, not much detail at all, try to put some actual car like features like metalic paint, it kinda has that sheen to it, because at the moment these pieces you are coming up with dont look like you are really putting any effort in!

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Quote PixelPusher Replybullet Posted: 04 April 2005 at 3:20pm
Very, very flat. I think it has to do with the angle itself. The colors don't seem to do anything to add depth. The empty space between the wheels makes it look like a sticker or drawing.

Also, the windows have no highlight. Where is the lightsource? Have you defined one?
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Quote NinjaHamster Replybullet Posted: 06 April 2005 at 12:10pm
Flat... Even I could do better... Add more contrast, and add gleam to windows etc.
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