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Quote yoursavior Replybullet Topic: A Small Spaceship
    Posted: 12 July 2008 at 7:32am
Its a small spaceship. Critique would be wonderful. :)

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Quote Artisan Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2008 at 7:39am
Hey,

This forum has an automatic zoom function, so there is no need to post pixel art at a zoomed in level.

also being zoomed in it makes it almost impossible for me to comment or critique this peice because i cant see what it looks like at normal size.

change it to normal size and you will probably get more help :)

I like shiny things, i do indeed.
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Quote yoursavior Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2008 at 7:41am
I didn't know the magnifier was on the forums. Here's the normal one...

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Quote Artisan Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2008 at 8:00am
ok well now i can see it i think its too "hazy, you have the simple structure and lighting down but if you take a look at this screenshot of a mobile game i worked on



you can see looking at the player ship although it is smaller than yours it conveys much more detail, the same is seen in the boss ship.

you may want to consider increasing the contrast of your shadows all the colours seem quite similar.

finally you might want to consider not useing black outlines but thats up too you.

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Quote yoursavior Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2008 at 8:23am
I bumped up the contrast and tried to add some detail.

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