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getrealjoe
Seaman ![]() Joined: 20 July 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 19 |
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![]() ![]() With menu ![]() Character ![]() House, shape isnt mine, but i changed the shading ![]() Mailbox ![]() Flower What do you think? |
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Saboteur
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Looks a lot like Bear's work. Or something Bear did a while back...
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"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."
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getrealjoe
Seaman ![]() Joined: 20 July 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 19 |
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coulda been an inspiration.
i didnt copy it though. |
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Citizen_Insane
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 30 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 189 |
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I saw him working on it, personally..
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Saboteur
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Haha, whoa, wasn't accusing anything. And yeah, you picked good inspiration, if it truly was your inspiration.
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"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."
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PixelSnader
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its not ripped, but its pretty much the same style indeed, nice job on that, i usually find it hard to copy someones style oh and for the people who want/feel the need for it, heres the thread by bear: |
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1ucas
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 27 June 2005 Location: Brazil Online Status: Offline Posts: 174 |
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It's ok, but I think the anti-aliasing is just... ugh.. terrible.
Some stuff shouldn't even be anti-aliased and they were. AA is a good thing, but you should use it only when you actually need it. For example, the curve at the right of the top status bar: no need for AA there. Here's a quick edit. Notice the status bar circle, the house and the status bar. ![]() Yeah. It's crap but works to make my point. You're kinda doing AA in reverese, by the way. You're using dark colors where light colors should be, and vice-versa. Edited by 1ucas |
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Blueberry_pie
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Other than the things mentioned here, I'd suggest adding some more
things to the scene. Right now you have clouds, a flower, a house and a
mailbox... It looks kinda empty to me.
Perhaps you could add some trees or other things. |
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getrealjoe
Seaman ![]() Joined: 20 July 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 19 |
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haha, i wasnt really focusing on the menu bar, but thanks addressing it. |
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Bear
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AA is still wrong, i'd edit but i'm too lazy >.> srry
anyways you just edited my house, i could be a jerk and be all mad, but i won't if you just credit me if you go further with this >.> |
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pixelblink
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the clouds were straight of Bear's image as well they were just mirrored in the middle. Honestly, I won't give any critique on this piece as it lacks originality. Try your own style instead of taking it directly or indirectly from Bear
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Psychotic_Carp
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008 |
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Originally posted by pixelblink
the clouds were straight of Bear's image as well they were just mirrored in the middle. Honestly, I won't give any critique on this piece as it lacks originality. Try your own style instead of taking it directly or indirectly from Bear
the house (as bear said) is virtually the same as well as the flower, seems like nothing is really new here Edited by Psychotic_Carp |
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getrealjoe
Seaman ![]() Joined: 20 July 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 19 |
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i took one screenshot and played around with it. i already said i didnt make this completely on my own.
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getrealjoe
Seaman ![]() Joined: 20 July 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 19 |
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oh, and by the way, the flower, character and mailbox are my own.
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Wannahlakujuu
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205 |
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Don't double post, edit it.
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Maestro
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 27 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 31 |
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Well, you could label where you got your inspiration from next time,
then I'd see nothing wrong with it. If you're precise enough about it,
as in "I took the cloud from BEar, mirrored it at the middle and
modified it a little." Mabye with a link, too.
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