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    Posted: 25 August 2005 at 11:28am
ok something i started a while ago and only got tround to shading.
One of the first pieces i drew and scaned. need ideas for legs!!
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Quote Wannahlakujuu Replybullet Posted: 25 August 2005 at 2:57pm
Interesting, character, but you didn't really shade it with form. work on that, and it will look great
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Quote Psychotic_Carp Replybullet Posted: 25 August 2005 at 9:15pm

I love the idea and it makes me smile :P

 

but it does nit a bit of work on the shading and the bandana should have some thickness where the sharks flesh ends, or the flesh should bulge if the bandana is that tight

got game?
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Quote Omegavolt Replybullet Posted: 26 August 2005 at 1:44am

Dont forget the dorsal fin!

I love the style, cartoony is always fun.  For the legs, you can always do the 'split tail', like human legs with fin feet.  Other than that, youre pretty much looking at legging around on a bent tail fin. ;)

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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 26 August 2005 at 2:09am
100 posts WOHOO

phychotic carp: im glad to mkae u smile. yeah i think i will make the
edge of the badana stand out a bit

omegavolt: fin feet!?!? how would that work.i was thinking of giving
him human legs but shaded in shark colurs, maybe some of the
trousers karate guys wear and a belt (green). how does it sound

ps. any ideas to make the sword look good?

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Quote Rifts Replybullet Posted: 26 August 2005 at 3:25am
the perspective on the legs look goodm but dosent seem to match the
shark :S looks like the legs have a load of potantial to me/ i think the
sword could use some work, a bit of AA might be good on this peice,
and he has no bottem teath. oh and the bandanna looks too flat like it
dosent curve round his head.
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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 26 August 2005 at 3:54am
he doesnt need bottom teeth he a special shark, nah i might put
some other teeth in. i think hte legs do math because when i stand
and put my legs in same positon my body can face any angle apart
from backwards seeing as im not an owl. i think ill put a design on
the sword like writing or flames or something
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Quote Dixet Replybullet Posted: 26 August 2005 at 8:50am
The lineart looks able to be one of "Sponge Bob" XD
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Quote Dutrho Replybullet Posted: 26 August 2005 at 9:05am
for the feet you could try some webbed feet with fins as toes.
Mmmm.. Thats good placebo!
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Quote Citizen_Insane Replybullet Posted: 26 August 2005 at 1:43pm

that's kind of funny..  you should do some other ninja colleagues, or like a samurai squid or something.  one thing that particularly stands out to me is the teeth, they just seem kind of blah compared to everything else..

maybe you should thicken the blood a bit, and add more definition to the teeth to kind of separate them...

maybe a thicker outline around the whole thing would look pretty cool, too.. but it's your piece

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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 26 August 2005 at 3:28pm
i no the teeth need work i only put them in temporarily, i do more
work on the thanks for c&c citizen insane
i did make up a crappy drawing of a hammer head boxer i may
make a collection
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Quote Maestro Replybullet Posted: 26 August 2005 at 4:32pm
Guess what. I found the idea that funky that I whipped this little fella up:

Nunchuckies!
Since it's all your idea and such, it's a present for you.
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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 26 August 2005 at 4:39pm
nice gd aaing and all in about 10 colors

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Quote Citizen_Insane Replybullet Posted: 27 August 2005 at 5:25pm

that's pretty good

 

what you should do, though.. or what I would do, is I'd make the grass get gradually darker as you go further back towards the mountains and stuff...

just to show some depth, you know?

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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 31 August 2005 at 4:12am
piece uploaded to gallery.
http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/5565.htm
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