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Quote Biuzer Replybullet Topic: Inmost (Metroidvania game WIP)
    Posted: 03 June 2016 at 12:27pm


I am working on platformer game in monochromatic pixel art style.
Just started the work and i need some critic :)

There is no enemies yet







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Quote drain Replybullet Posted: 06 June 2016 at 7:50pm
Your pictures are a little squished and cannot be critiqued that effectively, because we can't any of the individual pixels.

Can you re-upload with a clearer definition?
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Quote Biuzer Replybullet Posted: 07 June 2016 at 1:02am
drain Done.

And update with some lighting

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Quote drain Replybullet Posted: 08 June 2016 at 6:05am
They're a bit too big now, but yeah, it's fine now.

I really like how it looks! Nitpicks are the colours are too dull. Unless that was your intention, I would recommend hue-shifting your monochrome palette a bit. The vines/branches/tentacles do not read well because they blend in too much with other game elements, incorporating an outline to them would be a good way to remedy this.
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Quote Yuran Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2016 at 8:49pm
You can liven up space - placing all sorts of flying animated dust particles. You can add more animated objects (moving web, small animals - rats, bats, spiders, a cloud of fog and so on). This will look just phenomenal :)
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Quote saulc12 Replybullet Posted: 15 June 2016 at 8:29am
That looks tremendous, really good choice of shades and some very nice lighting effects going on - excellent work.
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