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EdJr
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Joined: 28 October 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 22 |
   Posted: 19 August 2010 at 4:46pm |
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I would make an animation, but I'm too tired and I know that I don't have chance. But I'll leave the last step of my piece:
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ultimaodin
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Joined: 04 May 2010 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 162 |
Posted: 19 August 2010 at 6:15pm |
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@Rostii- I actually prefer the first one.
@EdJr- I like this however some more yellow in the highlights and blue in the shadow might help it look more slimy. Oh and the hands with the eyes also reminds me of Ahhh Real Monsters. Love that show! |
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The world is but a shadow of emotion, cast in shades of grey.
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FrostPumpkin
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Joined: 18 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 188 |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 4:45am |
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Guys, keep it mind that dithering makes it looks rough. That's why there's the additionnal challenge.
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slym
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Joined: 04 January 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 116 |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 9:57am |
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This is what I have so far:
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Rostii
Seaman 
Joined: 11 May 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 19 |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 2:28pm |
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Originally posted by ultimaodin @Rostii- I actually prefer the first one. Really? I think the second one is better, it seems like it pops more. I made another one with less dithering, and a few edits. Maybe you will agree on this one being the dominate one?  < id="gwProxy" ="">< ="jsCall();" id="jsProxy" =""> |
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jalonso
Admiral 
Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 2:57pm |
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Originally posted by Rostii Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay Betterrrrrrrrrrrrrr! BG could be touched a bit |
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Rostii
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Joined: 11 May 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 19 |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 4:35pm |
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Edited the background and some areas on the creature that could use work:
 Should I keep the transparent circles? < id="gwProxy" ="">< ="jsCall();" id="jsProxy" =""> |
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ultimaodin
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Joined: 04 May 2010 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 162 |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 5:15pm |
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The new look is definite improvement. I preferred this composition mainly because it didn't just seem stationary but like it was coming at you.
I liked the transparent bubbly bag but it didn't do anything for the piece I think some sort of motion lines or some sort of optical illusion promoting the idea of momentum. Just a suggestion though. More chunks of slime falling off like in the top left would also make it more interesting I personally believe. |
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PixelSnader
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Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194 |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 7:16pm |
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I call him..
Waldmeister |
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jalonso
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Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
Posted: 20 August 2010 at 8:33pm |
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@Rostii, this week's entries demand you step it up. Check out how FrostPumpkin added smaller versions to add depth and volume. I don't say copy him but think about making the BG part of the scene as opposed to a design/graphic BG, ya noes?
@snader, you kill me >.< Edited by jalonso - 20 August 2010 at 8:33pm |
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ev149
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Joined: 01 January 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14 |
Posted: 21 August 2010 at 8:27am |
Any ideas for how it could be improved? |
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Paulo Peres
Seaman
Joined: 26 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 23 |
Posted: 21 August 2010 at 11:24am |
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Colorized slimy.
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Rostii
Seaman
Joined: 11 May 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 19 |
Posted: 22 August 2010 at 12:35am |
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Alright, I think I'm done now...
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dillinger
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Joined: 21 August 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1 |
Posted: 22 August 2010 at 10:36am |
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My WIP
Treasure Chest Burster 
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