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dpixel
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 February 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 564 |
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I could say maybe some shading on the face and the coat. And how about opening that coat a little too? Give us a hint of what else she has on under there.
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DeProgrammer
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 22 August 2020 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 81 |
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Haha. Yeah, I planned on shading it once my assailants--I mean, critics--were satisfied.
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orenshtiv
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 28 May 2009 Location: Israel Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
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Originally posted by DeProgrammer Sooo... ![]() What next? (I'm not getting rid of the trench coat. It's one of my trademarks! Besides, the female version of me I made in City of Heroes looked female, and she had short hair, a fedora, and a trench coat!) nice! now it looks great! :D |
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PixelSnader
Commander ![]() ![]() Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194 |
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isn't this the same as the he-she challenge?
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DeProgrammer
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 22 August 2020 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 81 |
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Not exactly. The he-she challenge required you to use a famous character, and with different dimensions/colors. It also didn't allow animation.
Edited by DeProgrammer - 17 September 2009 at 12:38pm |
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Hapiel
Rear Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266 |
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Too bad you already did yourself yes ;)
(but 'she' could use an update :D) |
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MagicKoi
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 December 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 23 |
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tenentenen
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 August 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 24 |
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Ok, so this is my wip, there will be a body eventually too. im having a tough time with the hair shading. any c&c?
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I am a person, as is anybody else in this world. I expect nothing from you, except what you expect from me.
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r1k
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 01 April 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 336 |
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@rk1: Looks real good. Just that right knee looks like it has some sort of bone disease. ha, ya. I was trying to have the leg get bigger to have it coming closer to the viewer but It didnt work out right, Ill post I more refined line art in a bit. |
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DeProgrammer
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 22 August 2020 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 81 |
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Okay, one more for today! It really doesn't look good, and I don't think I'm going to keep going with this modification. :P
![]() That's right...nothing underneath the trench coat, as per the image at the top of this comic. :P |
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r1k
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 01 April 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 336 |
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thats looking alot better so far deprogrammer, but I cant help but feel her body is too narrow for her head.
anyways heres an update on mine ![]() lower half is still rough cause Im still not too sure on it. Face it rough too, not sure how Im going to do the face really. |
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Hapiel
Rear Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266 |
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Would the girl - you really show that much of herself?
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crow
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 30 August 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 26 |
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100% better but still not perfect
the legs look a little off balanced move them 1 or 2 px to the left
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DeProgrammer
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 22 August 2020 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 81 |
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I moved them two pixels to the left the last time someone said that, back on the 16th... :P Well, the left leg is already farther to the left than in my reference (according to the curve of that part of the trench coat, anyway), but the right one may not be far enough left yet.
And yes, her body is too narrow for her head. That one's purposeful. >.> (If it's 100% better, does that mean it's OldQuality + 100% = NewQuality, which means the old quality was less than 0% if the new quality is less than 100%...or does it mean it's 200% of its original quality?) ![]() Edited by DeProgrammer - 18 September 2009 at 6:00am |
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r1k
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 01 April 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 336 |
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little bit further
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cthulhu
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 November 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 28 |
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Artist formerly known as "herbert_west"
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skamocore
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3866 |
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Just keep in mind that we are talking about a full-bofy image here.
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cthulhu
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 November 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 28 |
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Oh, crap...
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Artist formerly known as "herbert_west"
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SilverSpirit
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 14 September 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10 |
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Done!
this is MissComunication , a girly version of myself that lives inside my head ![]() Edited by SilverSpirit - 19 September 2009 at 2:57pm |
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orenshtiv
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 28 May 2009 Location: Israel Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
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Originally posted by r1k little bit further ![]() i think ur revealing too much here,but nice,and i think the mouth should be smaller :P |
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Skull
Commander ![]() ![]() PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521 |
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Originally posted by smk ![]() Don't look at her hands yet ;D Who's looking at the hands.. ?! |
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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Originally posted by smk ![]() Don't look at her hands yet ;D Originally posted by Skull Who's looking at the hands.. ?! Who's NOT looking at the rules :| |
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orenshtiv
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 28 May 2009 Location: Israel Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
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Originally posted by cthulhu ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() i think her head is too long, Edited by orenshtiv - 19 September 2009 at 2:07pm |
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SilverSpirit
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 14 September 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10 |
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Perves
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orenshtiv
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 28 May 2009 Location: Israel Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
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smk, add some clouds xD
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smk
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 22 February 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 150 |
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Damn jalonso, you're right ><...
I'll just make a bandage, blood all over it, so that my female counter-part has severed-off legs ;D? EDIT: Seriously though, don't worry I have a back-up plan THANKS FOR NOTICING! PS. Can't add clouds, because they would diver the attention back to the hands ;D EDIT: ![]() Fixed Jal honey. And btw, if someone wants to see how I look like (work safe): Link Edited by smk - 19 September 2009 at 7:38pm |
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DeProgrammer
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 22 August 2020 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 81 |
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Any more crits I haven't dismissed?
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orenshtiv
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 28 May 2009 Location: Israel Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
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Originally posted by DeProgrammer Any more crits I haven't dismissed? ![]() ![]() i think you can add more sadows on the *face :P Edited by orenshtiv - 20 September 2009 at 9:56am |
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SilverSpirit
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 14 September 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10 |
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Originally posted by DeProgrammer Any more crits I haven't dismissed? ![]() ![]() I think the eye should be more down , and that it's hard to understand that the hand it pointing at you , something wrong with it ... I don't know . other than that it's cool . |
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Kren
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 18 October 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 89 |
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how about opening the trench coat and showing some coconuts ;)?
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DeProgrammer
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 22 August 2020 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 81 |
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I did. They don't show very well.
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greenraven
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 September 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2598 |
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Originally posted by jalonso Originally posted by smk ![]() Don't look at her hands yet ;D Originally posted by Skull Who's looking at the hands.. ?! Who's NOT looking at the rules :| Wait, I don't get it. What rule was that breaking? o_O edit: Oh, wait. Full body, right? Edited by greenraven - 20 September 2009 at 3:07pm |
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DeProgrammer
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 22 August 2020 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 81 |
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It needed to be a full-body image according to the rules, Greenraven.
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smk
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 22 February 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 150 |
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Originally posted by greenraven Wait, I don't get it. What rule was that breaking? o_O edit: Oh, wait. Full body, right? Yeah, thank god Jal pointed that out in time! Oh, btw, just finished my entry :3 |
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AngelOTG
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 28 February 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 258 |
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...why is every girl version of these guys a female whore? I think unless you posted a nude image of yourself you should not make nude women. D<
(Jk. All the pieces so far are wonderful. :D) |
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eghost
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 19 June 2018 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 99 |
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Edited by eghost - 20 September 2009 at 11:15pm |
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smk
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 22 February 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 150 |
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Originally posted by Angel of the Great ...why is every girl version of these guys a female whore? I think unless you posted a nude image of yourself you should not make nude women. D< (Jk. All the pieces so far are wonderful. :D) Angel of the Death... was that a challenge? ;3 |
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