So, besides the always appreciated c+c, what I'm mainly asking for help here is with the wings... I don't know how to make them look like something that isn't crap D:



Also: pose is stolen from an in-game screenshot of Super Smash Bros Brawl (of Metaknight using his down taunt, the one where he flaps his wings), don't have a link because it's on my TV, and the basic style/a lot of the palette is stolen from the friend collage from Kirby's Dreamland 3 (link)

Thanks in advance for halp/c+c :D