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Seaman
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Quote playplay Replybullet Topic: the girl whom i am pursuing
    Posted: 30 December 2010 at 6:27am
the girl whom i am pursuing
ps: I'm a green hand
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A.B. Lazer
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Quote A.B. Lazer Replybullet Posted: 30 December 2010 at 4:13pm
Pursuing - is it a right word? Stalking is not good activity.

Overall nice. But.
Nose is drawn weird.
Relative positions of eyes and mouth are strange also. Face outline suggests that line of eyes should be parallel to the ground, and now one eye is higher than other.
Fingers on her right hand use too much black color.
Legs are not drawn fully, seems that they are were cropped before saving.

Edited by A.B. Lazer - 30 December 2010 at 4:14pm
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Quote lolosaur Replybullet Posted: 30 December 2010 at 4:33pm

Lower the brow and fix the nose and you have a killer pixel art.
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Quote ChrisButton Replybullet Posted: 02 January 2011 at 6:17am
Where's her feet dude?
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