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   here is my modern apartment and my first attempt im not finished yet

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kallum Seaman Joined: 21 November 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Topic: modern apartment Posted: 28 November 2005 at 8:45am
	here is my modern apartment and my first attempt im not finished yet
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Benito Midshipman Joined: 16 November 2005 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 70	Posted: 28 November 2005 at 12:58pm
	I really like the sofa
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kallum Seaman Joined: 21 November 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 28 November 2005 at 1:00pm
	is tht it lol any room for improvement on any of it and is there anything else u think will look gd in the room
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Brian the Great Commander RED! Joined: 03 March 2005 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 2221	Posted: 28 November 2005 at 1:56pm
	Please, please, good people. Let's try to make a little more constructie posts with spelling/grammar and normal-sized smileys. -- The sofa looks real comfy. Whatever you do, keep it that way. I also like the techniques you used on the laptop and telephone. What confuses me though, is that your table and lava-lamps(?) look way worse. The bubbles need highlights and a wee bit contrast. The table needs a little texture, IMO. Not really a point of critique as much as an opinion. I do recommend adding a highlight on the bottom two lines that are now coloured the same as the surface of the table. Other than that, get a wallpaper and get that floor contrast or a texture. It really needs it. There, a wee bit of precious C&C. Hope it helps you on improving.

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