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Manuziari
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Quote Manuziari Replybullet Topic: Penguin - Lineart
    Posted: 04 June 2011 at 8:18pm
Hi, I made a lineart of a penguin and I'd like to know what you think of it before I shade it. I'll post all the progress here. Check it out:



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Quote Spot Replybullet Posted: 05 June 2011 at 6:54am
Nice!
 
Though I would put more emphasis on the toes and hook of beak, also head feathers
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 05 June 2011 at 2:00pm
yes, the reference has an interesting curve to the underside of the beak, as well as a distinct (though small) hook at the end. Defining the individual toes would also be nice. generally though there's not much to say at this point, get a little deeper into the project so we can give better critique.
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