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Manuziari
Seaman
Joined: 13 February 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 37 |
![]() Topic: Penguin - LineartPosted: 04 June 2011 at 8:18pm |
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Hi, I made a lineart of a penguin and I'd like to know what you think of it before I shade it. I'll post all the progress here. Check it out:
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Spot
Seaman
Joined: 03 June 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20 |
![]() Posted: 05 June 2011 at 6:54am |
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Nice!
Though I would put more emphasis on the toes and hook of beak, also head feathers
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cure
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Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859 |
![]() Posted: 05 June 2011 at 2:00pm |
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yes, the reference has an interesting curve to the underside of the beak, as well as a distinct (though small) hook at the end. Defining the individual toes would also be nice. generally though there's not much to say at this point, get a little deeper into the project so we can give better critique.
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