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Quote Vine Replybullet Topic: Beginnings of a GB tileset
    Posted: 05 June 2011 at 2:17pm
Fairly new to pixeling, be harsh so I know where I screwed up.


A parallaxing mountain range in the background.


Clouds and stars~

Personally I feel like the scenery is lacking something, or there's much room for improvement.
The rocks need to be redone, also looking for critique on the blocks ;p
Suggestions?
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Quote Juniorps Replybullet Posted: 05 June 2011 at 2:47pm
For me the second image, the background does not fit the platform, the first image is actually better, you can work the mountains, and working with the same colors the clouds.
Second image is more like a universe, would be cool to work with color purple and not much to work with clouds but tracks like this picture




Hope this helps (Picture given sample was removed from the site Pixinspace.com.
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