Pixel Joint Forum: Over the Mountains WIP

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this is just something i worked on over the past four days whenever i got the time. i wanted to know what people thought before i went any further.

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Ludouse Seaman Joined: 13 April 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1	Topic: Over the Mountains WIP Posted: 27 August 2011 at 10:55am
	this is just something i worked on over the past four days whenever i got the time. i wanted to know what people thought before i went any further.
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lolosaur Midshipman Joined: 25 December 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 45	Posted: 28 August 2011 at 3:12pm
	Detail just one element of your pic and you might get a few comments. Start with the sun, give it some warmth with a bit of shading.
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 28 August 2011 at 4:45pm
	mountains are pretty sloppy. lots of jaggies on them, and I don't understand why they're darker on top, and why that dark section has a light blue outline. it's also very artificial how evenly spaced they are, and that they're approximately the same height. use photographic references of mountains via google.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 12 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 28 August 2011 at 7:15pm
	Welcome to Pixeljoint... I have sent this art back for revision. You are new here and I'm not picking on you personally. When you open a WIP thread = You need c+c, help, advice, guidance, w/e. When you submit to gallery = You are satisfied and proud of yourself and your work and ready to get some love. When you do both at the same time = People ignore your work and your thread + Mods send the art back as we don't know what the deal is and everyone here is an artist too (even Mods) working on their own stuff.
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