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Here is the end product. I still find problems in it but don't know how to fix. So, please help

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Aastikya Midshipman Joined: 19 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86	Topic: Weekly Challenge Posted: 17 November 2011 at 6:53am
	Here is the end product. I still find problems in it but don't know how to fix. So, please help
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Kravvon Nar'roth Seaman Joined: 05 March 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 39	Posted: 17 November 2011 at 7:25am
	*Originally posted by Aastikya* Here is the end product. I still find problems in it but don't know how to fix. So, please help What problems, specifically, do you see? Identifying and understanding the problems is the first step to fixing them. Off the top of my head, the grass (foreground & background) could use more contrast, and as for that black line at the edge of the road...
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Aastikya Midshipman Joined: 19 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86	Posted: 17 November 2011 at 8:33am
	The air blow indicators look jaggy but I find it difficult to fix.
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Friend Commander Joined: 01 April 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 710	Posted: 17 November 2011 at 10:47am
	does the guy have a green shirt?? Not a good choice against the grass when your greens have such low contrast. The hilt of the umbrella seems to be off center. I smoothed the air blow lines: Also, it is never a great idea to use neutral greys, especially with vibrant colors. it just don't look very good. Edited by Frost Butt - 17 November 2011 at 11:41am
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