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Quote TheoVision Replybullet Posted: 19 July 2012 at 10:43am
@ Lehmure: I think the problem with the lava is that it normaly flows to a lower point, like a river. The lava lines now seem a bit off as it is not clear how it flows in respect with the surrounding area. In other words: you need one higher point, and from there several flows to a lower point (now the perspective seems a bit off as lines go up and down and up again)
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Quote Lehmure Replybullet Posted: 19 July 2012 at 11:26am
Thanks Theo, but i not gonna work in the jedi fighting in the lava, i cant do the other jedi. D:
Thats why i made the Darth Vader, and thanks for the critiques. (Sorry, my english almost gave me canc?r. .-.)
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Quote Dont Replybullet Posted: 19 July 2012 at 2:44pm
what u guys think of this?
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Quote shampoop Replybullet Posted: 19 July 2012 at 11:33pm
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Quote TheoVision Replybullet Posted: 20 July 2012 at 12:54am
Quick update - didn't have as much time yesterday as I hoped...

              

Again, changed some bits, worked some more on the composition, added more color. Hope you like.
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Quote Nikonani Replybullet Posted: 20 July 2012 at 6:07am
Very nice Theo, I definitely like where it's going  I'm sure you know of it, but if you perhaps don't there's a weird bit of dithering going on in the area you updated that really stands out to me and ruins the whole "shiny, 3D trophy" effect (once you see it you can't unsee it!):
 
 
I think the previous rev actually was going in the right direction with that little "glare" area.  Other than that it stands out as my favorite magazine so far, awesome stuff


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Quote Nevercreature Replybullet Posted: 20 July 2012 at 7:37am
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Quote Danori Replybullet Posted: 20 July 2012 at 9:56pm


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Quote Gamamoto Replybullet Posted: 21 July 2012 at 5:48am
Amazing :')
I like the way it's going ! 
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Quote Digital Replybullet Posted: 21 July 2012 at 10:33am
Applied several shading techniques plus minimized usage of shades of colors.

I might edit this or add more features to it after I lose my laziness in a bit. xD

P.S Just so you know, I like wizards. :]

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Quote Danori Replybullet Posted: 21 July 2012 at 2:42pm
Done!





The shading was inspired by one of TheoVisions pieces :)

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Quote Stronghold257 Replybullet Posted: 21 July 2012 at 3:45pm
Nice Danori.
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Quote AirStyle Replybullet Posted: 21 July 2012 at 6:27pm
Hands down, Danori, yours is the most hilarious.
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Quote Danori Replybullet Posted: 21 July 2012 at 7:35pm
That is exactly what I was going for!

Mission Accomplished xD
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Quote Digital Replybullet Posted: 21 July 2012 at 8:59pm
Made some edits.
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Still gonna make some edits. :]
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Quote Innomin Replybullet Posted: 22 July 2012 at 3:18pm
Posting this to force myself to finish it. It started as practice for larger/smaller characters than I'm used to, and backgrounds. It ended up being most of my week...



Obviously the text and sky need a little work. I'm going to see the new Batman movie in an hour, and I'll probably finish this up after that. Any other glaring errors on my part would be appreciated CC, even though I know it's a tall order for such a short amount of time.

Oh, and bonus points for naming all the girls in the corner. The only hint is they are in games released/TBR/re-released in 2012.


@Theovision: Is that subliminal messaging? Well it certainly worked - you definitely have a #1 there. Since you suggested the comp, are you submitting that piece for judging? It's apparent that you only worked on it this week, I'm just asking from a rules standpoint. I'm too new here to really know how it works...

@Dredlockz: Very nice PR-type style. He's one of my favorites as well, and you've captured it nicely. Also, good font work all around. It really looks like a magazine cover.

@Danori: I can never unsee that now. But seriously, the soft colors work very well with the subject matter, and the shading is fantastic. I wish the background was a little more saturated (...or something), to separate it a bit more from the foreground.

@Digital: I'm liking the polish you're doing. No pun intended. The border is very nice as well, and it's making me rethink a few things...
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Quote Innomin Replybullet Posted: 22 July 2012 at 11:41pm
I'm back, with a finished piece and some disappointment in Christopher Nolan. ...Bane...

Heh, guess I was too late for CC. I uploaded the final to the comp, with only hours left. Is it bad I started on Monday?
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