Pixel Joint Forum: UGLY FACE! NEED HELP

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I dunno whats wrong, but something left me satisfied.I think its the eye.

Please.

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maganegorap Seaman Joined: 12 March 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 38	Topic: UGLY FACE! NEED HELP Posted: 19 July 2012 at 9:32am
	I dunno whats wrong, but something left me satisfied.I think its the eye. Please.
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Yuran Commander Joined: 10 November 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 329	Posted: 19 July 2012 at 11:41am
	Your mistakes in anatomy very noticeable if you do work from general to details. Large patches of light and shadow. Твои ошибки в анатомии очень заметны, если выполняешь работу от общего к частному. Большими пятнами света и тени. Edited by Yuran - 19 July 2012 at 12:06pm
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 19 July 2012 at 2:56pm
	eyes are too far apart and too close to the sides of the head. the bridge of the nose doesn't flow into the brow as it should. the bridge is too massive and the ball of the nose is too small. the actual volumes are difficult to discern (depth of eye sockets, protrusion of cheekbones). refer to Yuran's edit for the fix to that problem (as well as corrected anatomy and a better way to begin structuring your images). and as always, use references of real faces if you aren't already.
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