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Zorg
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Joined: 14 June 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2 |
![]() Topic: Robot [Beginner pixel artist]Posted: 31 July 2012 at 10:41pm |
This is the first pixel piece I've actually been somewhat happy with and would actually consider showing. I would really like constructive criticism on how to improve this and maybe help with ways to start on, say, a bigger piece. Edited by Zorg - 31 July 2012 at 10:41pm |
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Yuran
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![]() Posted: 31 July 2012 at 11:42pm |
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Do the shadows a little bit brighter
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Mr.Fahrenheit
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![]() Posted: 01 August 2012 at 5:06am |
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I would actually say increase the contrast a little bit more.
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Zorg
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![]() Posted: 01 August 2012 at 10:31am |
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Do you think this is better?
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Jumble
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![]() Posted: 01 August 2012 at 12:37pm |
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The new one is a lot better in readability.
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Yuran
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![]() Posted: 02 August 2012 at 7:39pm |
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Originally posted by Yuran
Do the shadows a little bit brighter Google stupid and I am too :) Take a darker shade, not enough contrast (iron, it reflects glare vmozhestvo) To begin with try to make a shadow, it is flat Сделай темнее тени, не хватает контрастов (железо, оно отражает вможество бликов) Для начала попробуй сделать тень, он плоский |
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