Pixel Joint Forum: Robot [Beginner pixel artist]

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This is the first pixel piece I've actually been somewhat happy with and would actually consider showing. I would really like constructive criticism on how to improve this and maybe help with ways to start on, say, a bigger piece.

Edited by Zorg - 31 July 2012 at 10:41pm

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Zorg Seaman Joined: 14 June 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Topic: Robot [Beginner pixel artist] Posted: 31 July 2012 at 10:41pm
	This is the first pixel piece I've actually been somewhat happy with and would actually consider showing. I would really like constructive criticism on how to improve this and maybe help with ways to start on, say, a bigger piece. Edited by Zorg - 31 July 2012 at 10:41pm
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Yuran Commander Joined: 01 October 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 329	Posted: 31 July 2012 at 11:42pm
	Do the shadows a little bit brighter
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Mr.Fahrenheit Commander Joined: 01 April 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 238	Posted: 01 August 2012 at 5:06am
	I would actually say increase the contrast a little bit more.
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Zorg Seaman Joined: 14 June 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Posted: 01 August 2012 at 10:31am
	Do you think this is better? New: Old:
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Jumble Seaman Joined: 13 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14	Posted: 01 August 2012 at 12:37pm
	The new one is a lot better in readability.
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Yuran Commander Joined: 01 October 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 329	Posted: 02 August 2012 at 7:39pm
	*Originally posted by Yuran* Do the shadows a little bit brighter Google stupid and I am too :) Take a darker shade, not enough contrast (iron, it reflects glare vmozhestvo) To begin with try to make a shadow, it is flat Сделай темнее тени, не хватает контрастов (железо, оно отражает вможество бликов) Для начала попробуй сделать тень, он плоский
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