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Quote renzowolf Replybullet Topic: 1963 Vespa
    Posted: 16 September 2012 at 12:22am
Here is my latest. I live in Thailand, which along with Vietnam are the two main countries to have old Vespa's restored and then exported to America and stuff. I see a lot of them especially from the 1960's and they are in my opinion one of the most beautiful two wheeled vehicles in the world.





Critique is very helpful; I especially need help with making my materials look realistic. Along that lines I need some creative suggestions for lighting. Please tell me what you think.

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Quote - Replybullet Posted: 16 September 2012 at 1:56am
I don't think the wheels need any shadow parts. Aside that Its really good.
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Quote AirStyle Replybullet Posted: 16 September 2012 at 2:13pm
I think the shading for the tires look fine. Actually, if your light source is coming from directly above, which is what it looks like it's doing, then the tires may be completely covered in shadow.

Now, for some reason, the back tire doesn't look as round as the front tire. It may just be my eyes, but did you use the front tire as a template for the back tire? If not, then I can tell.

I like the shape of the scooter, though.

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Quote renzowolf Replybullet Posted: 16 September 2012 at 5:04pm
The tires are exactly the same, I even did a quick pixel check just while looking over the picture and I think it looks off because of the way I have the wheel cover intersecting with it.

Also, on another note, I think I need to make the whole things smaller. After looking back at it I realized I could probably do the whole thing at one fourth of its current size.
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