Pixel Joint Forum: Fighter WIP

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   Hmm, I'm not that much of a pixel artist but sometimes I like to do a few art pieces here and there... Need help on this one:

I need extreme criticism!!!!   

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Edited by Dash

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Dash Seaman Joined: 11 January 2006 Location: Canada Online Status: Offline Posts: 23	Topic: Fighter WIP Posted: 09 February 2006 at 10:49am
	Hmm, I'm not that much of a pixel artist but sometimes I like to do a few art pieces here and there... Need help on this one: I need extreme criticism!!!! Update: Edited by Dash
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 12 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 09 February 2006 at 10:57am
	the fingers look wonky
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Dash Seaman Joined: 11 January 2006 Location: Canada Online Status: Offline Posts: 23	Posted: 09 February 2006 at 11:04am
	haha thats not what i meant by "extreme"
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Souly Commander Joined: 13 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2451	Posted: 09 February 2006 at 11:50am
	But the fingers do look wonky!!!
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Larwick Commander Joined: 26 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 09 February 2006 at 11:56am
	The shading on his STOMACH gives the impression that it's twisted horribly >.< The legs also dont look right, but i have nothing to suggest there. Also, his crotch seems to have a huge GASH in it. Yeeey. Also, if i were you i'd not have his right hand look the same as his left (pose wise), it doesnt really look right against his chest (sorta looks like he's got a pocket on his chest... ouch), i would suggest a fist or something. I'm liking the hair. heheh. sighs hope that helps. Edited by Larwick

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Dash Seaman Joined: 11 January 2006 Location: Canada Online Status: Offline Posts: 23	Posted: 11 February 2006 at 12:27am
	Update: I changed the whole upper body and fixed the crotch area on the pants. Basically, my fighter fights with his wristbones, so he basically always has his palms open to expose the wrists..
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PatBBNT Seaman Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 12	Posted: 11 February 2006 at 12:32am
	Good Job Dash!!! Pat
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Omegavolt Commander Joined: 03 March 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 227	Posted: 13 February 2006 at 5:48am
	Just a quick input from me, but you might want to change the light source on his face to match the one on the rest of his body.
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