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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Topic: Suit
    Posted: 21 May 2013 at 6:20pm


hey ya guys! :) ~~IM BACK~~

any comments?

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Quote yaomon17 Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2013 at 6:28pm
his chin is too square and large. His nose is also a bit small. Ear is slightly too big. Other than that seems fine.
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Quote CraftyPixel Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2013 at 7:02pm
- Love it! , Yeah... his face seems a bit off for this specific scene. But this is really good for a start! -( make a suspicious face ;P )


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Quote King of Games Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2013 at 9:17pm
Love the colors, the dude looks like JGL from Looper, but yeah his head is too big.
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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 22 May 2013 at 6:11pm
ty guys! :) is this looking better?

I was thinking about adding a gun to his left hand but a3um had that idea already D:
so, what do you guys think?

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by looking at it now the position looks like im copying him :S i might change it

Edited by philippejugnet - 22 May 2013 at 6:24pm
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Quote RileyFiery Replybullet Posted: 22 May 2013 at 7:22pm
I'd add a gun to the right hand hanging rather than his left hand. The position doesn't look that similar.
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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 24 May 2013 at 3:33pm
Originally posted by RileyFiery

I'd add a gun to the right hand hanging rather than his left hand. The position doesn't look that similar.

ah, i'm glad it doest look like his, because i dont want people saying crap about my work.

does this work ? :D



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REF I USED FOR THE GUN ( i dont know much about guns nor gun designs D: )

Edited by philippejugnet - 24 May 2013 at 5:25pm
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Quote Numberplay Replybullet Posted: 24 May 2013 at 3:57pm
What if he holds a light source in his other hand?
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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 24 May 2013 at 4:26pm
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What if he holds a light source in his other hand?


maybe a lantern? i'll try sketching it here ;) ty for sharing buddy :D
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Quote RileyFiery Replybullet Posted: 24 May 2013 at 4:52pm
Might help to lower the barrel a tad more. Other than that, yeah it's good. I would keep his left hand holding the curtain or whatever material he's passing out from behind.
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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 24 May 2013 at 5:23pm
Originally posted by RileyFiery

Might help to lower the barrel a tad more. Other than that, yeah it's good. I would keep his left hand holding the curtain or whatever material he's passing out from behind.



whaaat D: there are no barrels in the picture, unless there is something else called barrel and I am not aware of.
wip update btw :)
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Quote Numberplay Replybullet Posted: 24 May 2013 at 5:34pm
The barrel of a gun.
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Quote DoctorDRG Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2013 at 12:57am
I would angle the gun more towards the floor or add some more space to the left side of the canvas.
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Quote Friend Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2013 at 10:58am
the entire anatomy looks off.  The angle of the face seems really weird and off from the turn of his neck, which is also off with the perspective of the body making him look like he's doing a strange contortion.  The direction of his eyes also seem to be backwards with the tilt of his head.  The facial features are WAY WAY too small, even for me, and my facial features are tiny.  The original ear size was natural, around 1/4 to slightly larger of the head is normal ear size.   The other facial features also need serious resizing.  Check facial feature proportions of a male adult.  His right arm/shoulder region is incredibly awkward and unnatural

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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2013 at 11:17am
decided to remove the gun~~

In the final stages already ;D


edit:
just read your comment friend ill try to read a little bit about it, i wasnt sure about the arm, since you meantioned im going to change it :)

edit:
from your critique, this is what I changed, idk what is wrong with the arm but doesnt look good, ill make another edit with the changes in the arm


arm edit:
guess this looks way better :D just have to fix some of the AA and some shapes :)


Edited by philippejugnet - 25 May 2013 at 11:48am
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Quote skittle Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2013 at 2:20pm
Oh boy... you work fast.
This is looking pretty awesome though! Definitely gonna fav this when it's done.
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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 26 May 2013 at 6:59am
calling it done friends :)


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