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Damian
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 December 2014 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 455 |
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Its smaller because its a kid :/
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Hapiel
Rear Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 14 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3263 |
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Originally posted by Limes ![]() Haha Limes, the kids are getting kids now? :p I think we could repurpose those designs and turn them into gnomes, we just need to change the poop hair to a red cap! That would at least justify why these 7 year old girls have breasts suddenly ;) |
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Limes
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 15 September 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 667 |
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Well sh*t. Gnomes it is! I read the hair as a villagers hat. It wasn't until I was making the mechanic that I started getting suspicious about the size difference.
7 year old mother could be a new MTV series. |
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Hapiel
Rear Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 14 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3263 |
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Originally posted by Limes 7 year old mother could be a new MTV series. ![]() |
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Teban100
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 March 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7 |
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![]() Is a market stall ok? I might make it taller so it seems more proportionate, but I kinda like the idea. |
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Hapiel
Rear Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 14 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3263 |
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Nice Teban!
I agree that taller would make more sense. Quick edit: ![]() |
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Damian
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 December 2014 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 455 |
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Made this a while back as an edit, forgot to post it.
![]() I felt that the wooden poles needed to be exaggerated in size to fit the exaggerated characters and style we're going for. It might need more contrast in areas though. Edited by Damian - 09 April 2015 at 7:14am |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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Things I wanna do for the next days:
signboard fences lantern wooden bench hay cart barrel water fountain tree stump with an axe wooden boxes |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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What about this 2 signboards?
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Harmonica!
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58 |
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So I started to revise the hanging sign to get it at the same angle as the building, and then the next thing I knew there was a new window!
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Damian
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 December 2014 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 455 |
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Just noticed the chimney isn't in perspective. Also, that sign looks good.
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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Looks cool :)
Thanks for the perspective improvement |
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Harmonica!
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58 |
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I played around with the door and roofing today.
![]() I feel that my roof tile needs some softening. It seems too bold to me. Also I had the idea that flower boxes for the windows could offer both decorative and platform options. |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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indeed, flower boxes as platform would be cool.
I think the middle roof is bolder than before, but I like both. I made a "tree stump with an axe" and a lamp post: ![]() |
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Harmonica!
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58 |
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Alright! I believe I'm done messing with the roofing.
![]() I'm liking the axe and stump. Perhaps the axe handle could use a slight curve to it? |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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I REALLY like this roof ;)
OLD Now, Can you help me with this Hay Cart? XD ![]() ![]() I think I'm almost there, but the hay is too yellow and dificult to make shadows because the color palette |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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Curved Axe:
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Damian
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 December 2014 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 455 |
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Thats a pretty sweet cart Melanke.
Love how the roof turned out. My only critique right now on the house would be the door, there seems to be a lot of noise, maybe something more chunky in clusters would be better. I'd also like to see it compared to a character for comparison, because right now width wise it looks a bit small. |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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I like this door, but think it can be used as a dungeon door, it feels a little bit macabre.
My girlfriend says the Hay looks like "Goku hair" ![]() |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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Water Fountain: ![]() I will try to animate it later |
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Hapiel
Rear Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 14 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3263 |
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Melanke, your contributions are great! :D
Thanks for kicking this back in action :) |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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Haha Thanks, I really believe in this project.
I think what motivates me more is dreaming about my next game using this assets. |
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Harmonica!
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58 |
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I touched up the windows and made an open variant.
![]() I also played around with the hay cart, but didn't seem to get anywhere. Later on I'll try again. |
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Kazen
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 22 January 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
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I couldn't remember my password for the forums so I haven't been able to post for a few days. Anyway, I've thought that the house doesn't really fit the style anymore (it doesn't look as 'clean'). SO what I did was try and update some of the old stuff to look more in style with the one going on in the jungle-set. The forward facing stone part of the house isn't tiled or something, it's just a copied part of what a3um did (I liked that look). Here it is.
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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Kazen, I don't know, this style looks like a little bit unfinished, or maybe I am too used to the style we are working on. We will have to debate on which style we should go with.
In the mean while I think I came up with an interesting way to create different configurations of the house. I present you Laurel & Hardy: ![]() (I hope you understand the reference) |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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HOUSE 1:
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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What I like in House 1:
- Roof, wood, stone; What I like in House 2: - Door, moss, stone (yea, I like both stone) (My gf likes house 2) |
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Damian
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 December 2014 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 455 |
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Kazen, that all looks great.
I think the cleaner (house 2) is better in terms of style, however not perfect yet. I'm not sure the bright purple works as a second light source though. I prefer the bigger door, but is it too big? I'd get a character in there for reference. I really like the roof on the first house though. I will say, the first house looks great, however I think personally it has to much unneeded detail, specifically in the wooden beams and the door. It is a cartoon cell shaded look we're going for after all, but at the same time we want to carefully add simple detail to make the art look interesting. Its a tough line to tread with this style :/ There is a vast improvement from when Melanke started working on the house again. With you guys working on this and the quick process, I can see the first basic house being finished soon and its variants soon after. Keep it up, and if I have the time I will join too. |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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I didn't touch the stonebrick wall but what about this wood modifications?
![]() I think we have to move together on this house, let's all agree with every single piece and move to the next piece. Starting by the wood, then the roof, then the stonebrick wall and on and on. |
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Harmonica!
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58 |
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![]() Here's an attempt at adapting roof 1 to house 2, and I've shifted the roof around so that it can be used as a platform |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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Nice, I think we all agree this roof is THE roof, right?
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Hapiel
Rear Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 14 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3263 |
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Sweet wood Melanke, that looks like the right amount of detail to me! And Harmonica, I was worrying about the roof as platform, I am glad you fixed that :)
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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Based on this style concerns I made some changes that clean up the water fountain, please help me choose between this 3 alternatives: ![]() ![]() |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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The wooden bench and another version of the hay cart
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Harmonica!
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58 |
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This just occurred to me. Should the fountain be adjusted for platform use?
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Harmonica!
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58 |
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So I started playing around with the idea of the fountain also serving for platforming and here's what I've got so far.
Originally I was thinking the top ridge of the hourglass shape could serve as a platform, but since that doesn't seem plausible to me now, I'm thinking that some gargoyle water spouts could be a good way to add platforms to the fountain. |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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I like your idea and we could use two kinds of fountain:
- decorative (the first one) - platform, could be a big tileable fountain, that can be used with any width |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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melanke
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Some really small changes:
- removing purple and green light in woods made ir a little cleaner - wooden windows with larger glass tiles fits more in the context - wide alternative to make layered houses ![]() Here is a mock: ![]() |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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Harmonica!
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58 |
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Here's the fountain so far.
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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Wow!! I like it a lot!, specially the "clamps", very cool ;)
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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Guys, I put a lot of work here, please don't say we have to change the style hahahahahah
![]() A Mock: ![]() I had to use 2 layers in some cases, I don't know if this is "accepted" but I had to do something similar with the jungle ground too |
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Kazen
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 22 January 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
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I don't have time to really do anything right now, but a quick glance would suggest that there are a lot of duplicate tiles. For example, when I look at these, there's currently six roof-tops, where four looks the same, with minor alterations. If you could reduce them all so there's no duplicate tiles, that would be much better (even my revision has duplicate tiles for roof and rocks, I was thinking to make variations on the repeated tiles though). I do like that you can create many different forms though, like the mock. In particular that you can go from roof to tower is a nice touch and can break up the variation a lot.
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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I agree with you, I think I am going to make the chimney again and some wall cracks
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Hapiel
Rear Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 14 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3263 |
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The flexibility of this house is awesome!
All that is still needed is an update on that stone texture, and it should be perfect! :D |
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Harmonica!
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58 |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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beautiful!!
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melanke
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- Roof variations: Chimney, cracks, vine, skylight
- Round Windows, wall cracks, wood cracks - The flower pot is back - Stairs - A decoration in the left side of the roof ![]() Mock: ![]() |
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melanke
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 February 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75 |
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I will take a break working in the house for now, so you can work on it without worrying about version conflicts.
I will continue with outside objects this week |
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