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Quote +.Lollypop.+ Replybullet Topic: Kitty Sprite Girl
    Posted: 20 February 2006 at 5:20am

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Quote Psychotic_Carp Replybullet Posted: 20 February 2006 at 5:39am
Thee upper body looks pretty good (other than she looks like shes holding her breasts :P ) but the legs are too straight.
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Quote Omegavolt Replybullet Posted: 20 February 2006 at 5:46am

Yes, if she is sitting, then you may want to foreshorten the legs a little more, or if the POV (point of view) is higher, you will need to foreshorten the feet.

And yeah, that arm/chest thing is hard to make out.  Is she crossing her arms or something?

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Quote +.Lollypop.+ Replybullet Posted: 20 February 2006 at 5:54am

Lol. Now that you mention it, it does appear as if she's groping herself. *shakes head* All it takes is another person POV, huh? *dies*

As with the anatomy, I'm not sure if I'll fix it, or complete this piece for that matter. She was originally going to be resting her arms on her knees, and her kitty feet were going to be in your face kind'a...big cute paws!...I just lost the drive to finish it.

All I need to know is if it's a good first attempt @ this style, I was more concered about the facial appearance and, more importantly, the shading and dithering. The lower half of her was extreamly rushed, I took my time on her face, and tail. The rest is well...as it is. I appreciate the comments, though! Hee hee. More practice for this girl.

 

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