ill make some enemies and then animate the character.. i dont want to add any detail until its animatedlol.

 

i will revise it later this week and makew the tiles better. and the background.. unless i keep it.. which i might

 

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your clouds are strange, the circle technique is ok for the sky, but seemes strange for clouds (AMHA)...

As Souly said, the black lines are not welcome.

And the grass is not finished as you said, really want to see it finished ^^

Why the hell did I thought to 'At My Humble Advice'

okay I hope I can make myself clear...
when the second lightest blue of the sky fades into the third lightest you have some nice, small dots to help with the "dithering" but when the first lightest fades into the second you seem to have restricted yourself to large and medium dots. If I were you I'd toss in some small dots and perhaps even overlap where 1st meets second into the area where 2nd meets third to make it smoother visually. I find the strip where there are NO dots to draw attention when what you probably want (given this is a background) is a continuos and interesting, but ignorable, backdrop.

and I like the idea of keeping the same shading for the clouds, but clouds are generally shadowy on the bottoms and light on the top, so perhaps the reason it currently looks odd is because you have a shadow all around the edges and the side of the cloud fully lit. Commonly this is called pillow-shading, and although I've never seen it done with such flair, it's still akward and a bad way to shade.

and if this is a mockup for a real game then I have a question: how would the little man on the far right get under the shelf he's currently on? he's too big to walk under it! maybe raise it a bit?

not sure on the background but the rest looks cool ;)

I agree with jj but then I almost always like black outlined pixel art. I think you went a tiny bit overboard on the sky though. I like the style just a little too much.