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Admiral ![]() Joined: 03 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 0 |
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CHALLENGE: Bait and SwitchIt's April (or at least close enough to it), so apparently that means it's time to fool people. This week, create an animation featuring two distinct frames where the second frame is intended to surprise the viewer. For best results, the first frame should last for roughly two or three seconds. CHALLENGE RULES
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CHALLENGE VOTINGVote now for your favorite pixelart in this week's challenge!CHALLENGE AWARDSThe Bait and Switch pixel art challenge is complete and we have three new champions. This week's challenge awards go to the following pieces:Thanks so much to all who took the time to vote and participate in the challenge! |
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PIXELNACHO
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Hello, this is Santodiablo
![]() 16 x 16px, 11 colors |
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jalonso
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Originally posted by NACHOSLAVE Hello, this is Santodiablo ![]() 16 x 16px, 11 colors ![]() |
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Lapada
Seaman ![]() Joined: 06 April 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20 |
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I gota too busy last week but I'll make it THIS TIME! >.>;;
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RoCroft
Seaman ![]() Joined: 24 March 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2 |
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Here my WIP, still have to do a lot of work :)
![]() Nice work Lapada!! This will be my first pixel art ever so pls give me some constructive criticism |
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 14 June 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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@RoCroft, You have to clean those lines. Also you are using 8 colors but hardly any of them show up. Increase the contrast in your palette.
See and review cure's pixelart and the noobtorial threads in the resource section if you have not already. |
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RoCroft
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@jalonso, thx for your tips, i will look up the tutorial, havn't seen it yes. And i will add more contrast in my palette, thx for your tips!
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Otto
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This is my idea, I hope the two frames are distinct enough, for as you can see the only change is that "she" closes her fan
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r1k
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 01 April 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 336 |
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wont be finishing this cause Im working on commissions instead, but just quickly sketched up an idea,
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CELS
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![]() Too much? Edited by CELS - 02 April 2014 at 1:13am |
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Gecimen
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excellent :)
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Mino
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Originally posted by Otto
This is my idea, I hope the two frames are distinct enough, for as you can see the only change is that "she" closes her fan ![]() haha, reminds me of something you'd see in warioware Edited by Mino - 03 April 2014 at 10:03pm |
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Otto
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@Mino, I hadn't thought of that, but you are right!
![]() I might still change a few things, here and there... |
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 14 June 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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@Otto, I like your idea for the most part but have some crits.
*The corner of the face with the fan over it maybe should be in the reds because she's just hiding not morphing. *The highlight of the chest is very harsh on the left side...right side too but not that much. *The hair to face without fan looks wrong to me. Maybe a bit of ears or some hair in the back will better set the face. * Something is just unladylike with the whole neck area, or lack of neck area. * The ruffles in the elbows look different in that one reads scalloped and the other straight edged. * Because of the period depicted maybe a fleur-de-lys would be better than hearts in the BG? * WHAT IS THAT GREEN AA COLOR FOR? o.O |
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Otto
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@jalonso Thanks a lot for the feedback! I have made a new version considering what you said.
I have opened the fan a little bit more to completely hide the face I am not sure what you mean by the chest, I have changed a bit the colours, do you mean that it is too light? I have changed a bit the hair to set the face better, I have seen in images that those wigs had often hair hanging over the ears, so I added that. I have tried to correct the neck area And the ruffles I prefer hearts just to make fun (I want to entitle it something like "kiss me") And finally, yes, I do have a problem with AA between different colours, I never know how to do it (I just put one of the shades of blue instead of green) Here is the picture ![]() Edited by Otto - 04 April 2014 at 1:16pm |
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jalonso
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Much nicer :)
I meant the highlight/light edge on the triangle part of her dress. The point of that triangle is not quite where the center would really be (maybe 10 px to the left). Also you have made a diamond pattern that also does not follow the curvature so those things make that light/highlight stand out a lot. I see about the BG and you are right. |
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Otto
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 November 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 57 |
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I think I know what you mean now. Here is my revised version
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jalonso
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That's what I meant :D
Why the pink in the border of frame 2? I think the 2nd frame could use being up for less time, try half. Edited by jalonso - 04 April 2014 at 4:06pm |
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Otto
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 November 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 57 |
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Here it is
![]() I don't know much about animations, but I made this one for the preview ![]() |
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