Very bottom of table on the edge facing us the random brown line... I think that's a minus. Think the table needs more of that bueatyful deep red velvet colour as well you use too little of it in total. Fix up that orange ball aswell it is to bright and cheerful for a seemingly lustful, lonely, piece.

This is absolutely bueatiful, is there any idea, symbolism in it? I cannot get over the emotion in the work of the colours and overall composition. Good Job man!

Edit: get rid of that bright red you used for the ball use the deep red as a replacement then get one of those blues and make that the shadow for it.

Edited by Limes - 27 May 2014 at 11:15pm