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kofoca
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Quote kofoca Replybullet Topic: [OC][CC][WIP] Documentary Title, first attempt
    Posted: 01 August 2014 at 7:54pm
Hello!

This is my first attempt at pixel art, a title for a documentary I'm working on. I wanted to utilize some elements of some of the original Megaman titles in it, not sure how its working so far.

Looking for criticism critique advice or what have you!

Thanks!

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Quote SuperTurnip Replybullet Posted: 01 August 2014 at 8:27pm
This looks good! My main crit is that if your title is referring to the score that "the player" has achieved and now possesses, you might want to add an apostrophe to make it possessive.
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