Pixel Joint Forum: Second Pixel Art (Need criticism/feedback)

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   Soo yeah, i tried pixel art the second time, what do you think?

Any feedback is helpful!

Thanks!

EDIT: 

Fixed it! (Thanks to Deliphin)

Edited by ZerLovesPixels - 30 August 2014 at 10:21am

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ZerLovesPixels Seaman Joined: 30 August 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Topic: Second Pixel Art (Need criticism/feedback) Posted: 30 August 2014 at 8:48am
	Soo yeah, i tried pixel art the second time, what do you think? Any feedback is helpful! Thanks! EDIT: Fixed it! (Thanks to Deliphin) Edited by ZerLovesPixels - 30 August 2014 at 10:21am
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Deliphin Seaman Joined: 24 November 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 30 August 2014 at 9:20am
	Interesting design. You should make the dip on the back side of the sword a little more round, and increase the size of the pommel. (pommel = ball at end of handle.) Also, on the guard of the handle, the green section pointing at where your hand goes, bend that up a little, pointing less at the handle.
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ZerLovesPixels Seaman Joined: 30 August 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Posted: 30 August 2014 at 9:57am
	*Originally posted by Deliphin* Interesting design.You should make the dip on the back side of the sword a little more round, and increase the size of the pommel. (pommel = ball at end of handle.) Also, on the guard of the handle, the green section pointing at where your hand goes, bend that up a little, pointing less at the handle. Thanks for the feedback, ill try to fix it later!
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Limes Commander Joined: 15 September 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 683	Posted: 30 August 2014 at 3:53pm
	I feel composition as such is far to flat Which is why I take a major liking toward scenes rather then designs. that Is all I have to say really the design is nice, Could use some better colours though.
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AimlessZealot Midshipman Joined: 29 March 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 43	Posted: 31 August 2014 at 2:51pm
	(Disclaimer : I'm a beginner at pixel art myself) I really like your sword's design like Limes mentions, but I notice that you've used a straight black for outlining and the mid separation. You might consider using lighter/darker shades of the adjacent squares to break up sections in a way that implies light/shadow over angles. I took the original image and broke up the black shading on the blade section with two additional colors as a way to demonstrate what I'm suggesting:
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