Pixel Joint Forum: Xelor

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..::Naso::..
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Topic: Xelor
Posted: 22 April 2006 at 1:22am

Just wanted pixel a drawing that this girl Wish made :)
this is what i got so far :P

iam haveing trouble with the Face part ( mummy/cloath material ) and i think the metal on the hat could look more metal :D
C&c would be apreciated

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..::Naso::..
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Posted: 22 April 2006 at 6:36pm

i did a few more addtions to it and i tryed to shade the face, i think it came out preety good. and made the metal look better.

c&c still apreciated

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jalonso
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Posted: 22 April 2006 at 6:41pm

I like it so far, but the style of shading on the face does not match the clothing/hat (which I like better). Also, the jaggies are severe in places, I see you've tried to work on the outlines some without success. Maybe this needs a bkg to be able to take care of the edges?

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Pixel_Outlaw
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Posted: 22 April 2006 at 7:44pm

Heh i just got a mental image of some ripped ttens using him as a volly ball. I can just hear the thump and see his cape flowing behind him as he passes over the net.

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..::Naso::..
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Posted: 23 April 2006 at 3:38pm

humm i have been trying and trying to make it non dither and more AA but i just cant get it right :X

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Aleiav
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Posted: 23 April 2006 at 4:00pm

I like the dithering and color choice on the ring around the hat. I think most of the shading is progressing well but the face seems over dithered. If you're having problems with AA, st0ven has good AA tuts.

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..::Naso::..
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Posted: 24 April 2006 at 4:32am

i tryed just takeing off the Dither and replaceing it with AA and this is what i got

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Aleiav
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Posted: 24 April 2006 at 10:20am

That's better. :)

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..::Naso::..
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Posted: 24 April 2006 at 2:27pm

well i think this might be the last update if i decied to stay all AA ( im keeping the metal ditherd, looks better )
Just fixed some AA Damage and added another color to smooth out that Dark blue with the mid blue.

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..::Naso::.. Commander Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200	Topic: Xelor Posted: 22 April 2006 at 1:22am
	Just wanted pixel a drawing that this girl Wish made :) this is what i got so far :P iam haveing trouble with the Face part ( mummy/cloath material ) and i think the metal on the hat could look more metal :D C&c would be apreciated
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..::Naso::.. Commander Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200	Posted: 22 April 2006 at 6:36pm
	i did a few more addtions to it and i tryed to shade the face, i think it came out preety good. and made the metal look better. c&c still apreciated
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 22 April 2006 at 6:41pm
	I like it so far, but the style of shading on the face does not match the clothing/hat (which I like better). Also, the jaggies are severe in places, I see you've tried to work on the outlines some without success. Maybe this needs a bkg to be able to take care of the edges?
	PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads
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Pixel_Outlaw Commander Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829	Posted: 22 April 2006 at 7:44pm
	Heh i just got a mental image of some ripped ttens using him as a volly ball. I can just hear the thump and see his cape flowing behind him as he passes over the net.

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..::Naso::.. Commander Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200	Posted: 23 April 2006 at 3:38pm
	humm i have been trying and trying to make it non dither and more AA but i just cant get it right :X
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 23 April 2006 at 4:00pm
	I like the dithering and color choice on the ring around the hat. I think most of the shading is progressing well but the face seems over dithered. If you're having problems with AA, st0ven has good AA tuts.
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..::Naso::.. Commander Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200	Posted: 24 April 2006 at 4:32am
	i tryed just takeing off the Dither and replaceing it with AA and this is what i got
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 24 April 2006 at 10:20am
	That's better. :)
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..::Naso::.. Commander Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200	Posted: 24 April 2006 at 2:27pm
	well i think this might be the last update if i decied to stay all AA ( im keeping the metal ditherd, looks better ) Just fixed some AA Damage and added another color to smooth out that Dark blue with the mid blue.
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Topic: Xelor