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Dutrho
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    Posted: 01 May 2006 at 6:43am


any CC?


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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 02 May 2006 at 1:02am
Aww, I think it's quite cute. It doesn't look too bad, but I think his head shouldn't be so high and lower and more to your right. Did you look at any ref pics?
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Quote Omegavolt Replybullet Posted: 02 May 2006 at 6:24am
I would probably lower the arch in its back as well.  Unless youre shooting for a cartoony look.
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Quote Dutrho Replybullet Posted: 02 May 2006 at 7:18am
Updated.

I lowered the head and back by one pixel.

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Quote Omegavolt Replybullet Posted: 02 May 2006 at 8:51am
No no, I mean the arch needs to become... um... un-arched.  Instead of making its back so curved, make it a little straighter.
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Quote Dutrho Replybullet Posted: 02 May 2006 at 9:22am
Updated again.

reshaped the curve on the back and lowered the head by another pixel.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 02 May 2006 at 10:11am
It seems the front legs are not in the right perspective. Eother left leg longer or rihjt leg shorter? <3 the head
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Quote Omegavolt Replybullet Posted: 02 May 2006 at 11:52am
Just add more length to the inside line of the right side leg so that it ends a little closer to his ear.
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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 02 May 2006 at 12:56pm
Aaaaaah! A labrador retriever puppy! :3 :3
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Quote Dutrho Replybullet Posted: 03 May 2006 at 8:36am
Updated* tried to fix the legs, any better?
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