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Hawkevil
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Quote Hawkevil Replybullet Topic: First pixelart...
    Posted: 20 May 2006 at 3:53pm

Here is a picture of Slash from Guns n' Roses. Its my first drawing and I was hoping to get some feedback and maybe some ideas on how to improve it.
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Quote Lawrence Replybullet Posted: 20 May 2006 at 5:37pm
The front arm looks like a slab of rubber. I think the wrist should be narrower, and the arm should have more definition. That's my main suggestion. Good piece though.
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