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    Posted: 18 November 2018 at 3:19pm
Hello, I've been working for 3 or 4 days in a small drawing of mushrooms and I have 2 problems ...
First:
how would it be a suitable background for a frontal image so desaturated as this one? How to correct the grass and the shadows?

Second:
too much noise? How would you fix it?

Thank you
(I hope I'm not asking too much )
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Quote snv Replybullet Posted: 18 November 2018 at 4:30pm
Looks fine to me. Without a mockup and what would be in front of these mushrooms it is hard to judge.

Here is an example of an index painted forest tileset from a commercial game https://imgur.com/a/pNOZU3M

hope it helps.

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Quote Bugbear Replybullet Posted: 19 November 2018 at 7:08am
I will try to make a sketch, thank you
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Quote Bugbear Replybullet Posted: 20 November 2018 at 6:13pm
"sketch"
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Quote snv Replybullet Posted: 22 November 2018 at 1:44pm
Looks nice. I suggest you can improve readability by making it a tad more contrast, like adding contrast outline to the objects and making important objects like that animal brighter with even more contrast outlines:
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Quote Bugbear Replybullet Posted: 01 December 2018 at 4:57pm
hello, this is what I have to this day, the work I take as a base is this: https://www.deviantart.com/francescabaerald/art/The-Shire-Lord-of-the-Rings-644487204
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Quote snv Replybullet Posted: 02 December 2018 at 9:09am
WOOOW! That is huge map!

Although I would have contacted the original artist instead, if she is not against retouching her artwork, and maybe she has any thoughts on it.
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