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Edgar Plutonio
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Quote Edgar Plutonio Replybullet Topic: Open Mouth
    Posted: 14 December 2018 at 5:16am
12 colors. I'm very new to pixel art, so hit me with all critiques and tips! I NEED TO LEARN ;)



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Quote NancyGold Replybullet Posted: 14 December 2018 at 9:38pm
Some teeth on the left look like they have dental caries
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Quote Edgar Plutonio Replybullet Posted: 16 December 2018 at 7:19pm
I'll make the contrast less noticeable ;D Any other feedback? Is the dithering too much?
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