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Quote Necrosquelch Replybullet Topic: Getting back in the game. Critique?
    Posted: 25 May 2019 at 5:19pm
Dipping my toes back into the pixel art world. Doodled this up as practice.

My anti-aliasing was never very good as I didn't study it very well back when I was doing it a bit more, so that much I know I need to work on. Was wondering if you all could catch things I'm missing. Any thoughts?

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Quote Necrosquelch Replybullet Posted: 26 May 2019 at 12:45pm
Started something else before working on other work of mine. This one's coming along quite nicely I think, though again I'd like some guidance with the anti-aliasing work. Once again, I've still admittedly only skimmed through some resources on the topic. I'm not yet familiar with when and where exactly I should be placing pixels for anti-aliasing. Any advice is appreciated of course.


Also, I made the booty much thicker than intended haha
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Quote Necrosquelch Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2019 at 6:24am
Meant do get more done yesterday, but that didn't happen clearly.

Still, progress has been made. I'll likely change the position of her right hand as the black on black is a bit much. I forgot the character's got on the gloves. Either way, any thoughts on my anti-aliasing? How I can improve it?

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Quote Necrosquelch Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2019 at 11:42am
Little doodle to get into an art mood. Any thoughts? I could use some advice working on a smaller scale.

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Quote Pig_catapult Replybullet Posted: 18 June 2019 at 3:12am
The waist proportion on the most revent seems too narrow, imo. Her knee's wider than her waist. Her center of balance also seems too far forward, like she might topple over.
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Quote PixelNovak Replybullet Posted: 18 June 2019 at 1:07pm
Love your linearts.
But your color palette is very dark, more contrast maybe?
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