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Quote yellowbouncyball Replybullet Posted: 18 September 2019 at 4:08pm
can i reclaim 19? sorry i forgot about this for a bit :P
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2019 at 12:31am
Sure but please turn on email notifications for your PMs (through the main site).
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Quote PC PIXEL Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2019 at 11:50pm
Updates for now...but I have some problems with the big alien and the shadows on the ground.
It's difficult to maintain the standards of the others tiles. ;)
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Quote gawrone Replybullet Posted: 20 September 2019 at 1:25am
In my opinion the big alien is good. To make sure of its ISO correctness, try to make a small test. Connect both shoulders top points, both knees and tips of the toes of both feet with straight iso line 2:1 and if those points are not on the same line, make some corrections. I think that the right (his left) leg is too high.

Small aliens appear very flat, while your stones are nicely 3-dimensional. Maybe you could apply similar technique to those alien heads.

I don't understand the portal. It doesn't look ISO to me. Looks like an oval in straight side view, slightly rotated to the left. I think maybe becasue you were constructing the isometric circle outline, but the pattern inside is flat. I think that few adjustmets to make that spiral in same projection will be enough. I'm sure someone more competent than me will help you with that.

In case of centipede leg I was talking about the first, thicker segment, not the second, thin one (I think that the thin one was ok on the previos WiP). The top leg is pointing almost north/up, and the leg we are talking about is pointing west/left, so please look at those two black lines on ISO square:



Both lines are "in reality" of the same lenght, but the one pointing north appears as shorter than the one pointing west. Your legs are the other way around.
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 20 September 2019 at 3:21am
@PC pixel, the left most alien is too flat, try to make it in a similar manner to the one lower.

You don't make a 3D object isometric by tilting it. That's how you make 2D shapes isometric.
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Quote darchangel Replybullet Posted: 20 September 2019 at 3:47am
Update for 53 to close off the transparency:


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Quote Eggy Replybullet Posted: 20 September 2019 at 1:30pm

Yeah I guess I'll redo the ground a bit haha. Your (WIP) tile helps me a lot PC PIXEL because I have to have more grass in my tile now and I think it's much easier to draw here :)
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Quote PC PIXEL Replybullet Posted: 21 September 2019 at 11:16pm
Originally posted by gawrone

In my opinion the big alien is good. To make sure of its ISO correctness, try to make a small test. Connect both shoulders top points, both knees and tips of the toes of both feet with straight iso line 2:1 and if those points are not on the same line, make some corrections. I think that the right (his left) leg is too high.

I maked the alien in base of that lines 2:1, all it should be be ok, the feet..I don't remember because I've changed them.
PS: I checked now and the problem is not in the feet but in the entire legs, they are as long as the arms and that is because it feels weird.
I have to restart...
But the rest of the alien is ok.
Small aliens appear very flat, while your stones are nicely 3-dimensional. Maybe you could apply similar technique to those alien heads.
Yeah, they are not finish because I was deciding the right colours of the other alien and in base on that I would have finish them.
The stones are only a copy of the vierbit work...
I don't understand the portal. It doesn't look ISO to me. Looks like an oval in straight side view, slightly rotated to the left. I think maybe becasue you were constructing the isometric circle outline, but the pattern inside is flat. I think that few adjustmets to make that spiral in same projection will be enough. I'm sure someone more competent than me will help you with that.
Yeah I know, it feels strange...I built the circle in iso but the inside is not working well...
In case of centipede leg I was talking about the first, thicker segment, not the second, thin one (I think that the thin one was ok on the previos WiP).
Ah...my bad, for me the first was the leftmost one.
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You don't make a 3D object isometric by tilting it. That's how you make 2D shapes isometric.

I wanted to do the impression that they are landing on the ground like a parachutes, and I was tring if that was possible.
Originally posted by Eggy

Yeah I guess I'll redo the ground a bit haha. Your (WIP) tile helps me a lot PC PIXEL because I have to have more grass in my tile now and I think it's much easier to draw here :)

About your tile and the spaceship...I'll wait until you're done the spaceship before I finish the piece that is on my tile.
I don't wanna do a look that is not what was you thinking.
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Quote MalevolentMask Replybullet Posted: 22 September 2019 at 8:01am
@darchangel, Nice Unicron! Always loved the opening part of that movie lol
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Quote PC PIXEL Replybullet Posted: 23 September 2019 at 10:59pm
If there are no other issues...
For the spaceship I will wait Eggy.

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Quote Reo Replybullet Posted: 23 September 2019 at 11:37pm

@PC PIXEL I enjoy the scale of your tile and I love the lil metal slug aliens. But you're not shading according to the light source. You are lighting your alien as if he was a flat piece of paper. I did a quick paint over, I hope that is okay? Be mindful of 3d shapes.
There's also a lot of banding and pillow shading in your sprite. Correcting the light source will help with that as well. It's a cool tile but some more dramatic lighting could help sell the portal even better.


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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 25 September 2019 at 6:31am
@PC PIXEL, what I mean about the projection of the jellyfishes being wrong, here's a fixed version:

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Quote PC PIXEL Replybullet Posted: 29 September 2019 at 11:19pm
Awww...I really am no good at this 
I will try to fix better that I can.
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 30 September 2019 at 2:43am
Originally posted by PC PIXEL

Awww...I really am no good at this 
I will try to fix better that I can.


Nobody starts with master skills, don't worry, it takes a little time to learn things :)
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Quote Eggy Replybullet Posted: 01 October 2019 at 12:11pm
Hey, sorry for no progress again - college has just started again and I've lately found myself occupied by other things (mostly getting interested in the art of sewing), but I'd still like to keep working on my tile
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Quote PC PIXEL Replybullet Posted: 09 October 2019 at 4:59am
Ok...after a week this is the result...
I hope I fixed the major issues and positioned the shadows correctily.

Originally posted by Eggy

Hey, sorry for no progress again - college has just started again and I've lately found myself occupied by other things (mostly getting interested in the art of sewing), but I'd still like to keep working on my tile

Sewing is difficult...I can barely sew a broken button in my shirts.
But if you like pixel art and sewing you have to try embroidery.
I don't know the corrects words in english but in italian they are called "quadri con ricamo a mezzo punto" and there are literally pixel art made in cotton string.
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Quote Dnilo Replybullet Posted: 09 October 2019 at 5:50am
Like a total noob (because I am, this is my first ISO contribution), I created this forgetting that I had to use a specific palette:


But then I swapped to the correct colors:


I think I'm done!
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Quote PC PIXEL Replybullet Posted: 10 October 2019 at 10:11pm
I'd like to try a last tile...can I have 26?
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 10 October 2019 at 10:12pm
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Quote Eggy Replybullet Posted: 11 October 2019 at 10:50am


Finally got some progress in, I think I'm finally satisfied with the ground
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 13 October 2019 at 5:00pm
It's going good Eggy!
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Quote darchangel Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2019 at 2:15am
I'll take 39 please
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2019 at 9:31am
You got it :)
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Quote gawrone Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2019 at 11:43pm
So glad to see the planet ISO alive again! After a short period of hibernation :)
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Quote PC PIXEL Replybullet Posted: 16 October 2019 at 11:25pm
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Quote gawrone Replybullet Posted: 17 October 2019 at 1:24am
XD

PC PIXEL you made my day. This is so crazy!
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 17 October 2019 at 3:17am
Looks good Pc pixel :)
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Quote PC PIXEL Replybullet Posted: 17 October 2019 at 5:14am
Thanks...
The fluffy animal reminded me the lemmings so...
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Quote gawrone Replybullet Posted: 17 October 2019 at 9:56am
PC Pixel. I wish to ask you for a small favor. Could you please add couple of black pixels to your 59 tile to finish the Paul Muad'dib's foot? I think it looks like cutted off a bit :)
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Quote PC PIXEL Replybullet Posted: 17 October 2019 at 9:55pm
Originally posted by gawrone

PC Pixel. I wish to ask you for a small favor. Could you please add couple of black pixels to your 59 tile to finish the Paul Muad'dib's foot? I think it looks like cutted off a bit :)
Like this?

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Quote gawrone Replybullet Posted: 17 October 2019 at 11:58pm
Sure! That's just perfect.
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Quote darchangel Replybullet Posted: 21 October 2019 at 4:01am
I think 39 is done:


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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 22 October 2019 at 3:40am
Looks great darchangel :)
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Quote Eggy Replybullet Posted: 25 October 2019 at 12:35pm

Almost done :)
PCPIXEL any chance you could change the dark outline of the ship fin in the upper left corner of your giant alien tile to the same shade of the other ship fin so that it matches once my tile is done? Thanks :>
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Quote PC PIXEL Replybullet Posted: 26 October 2019 at 12:01am
No problem...
Finish your tile and after I will make the corrections.
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Quote laydya Replybullet Posted: 16 November 2019 at 8:18am
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Quote laydya Replybullet Posted: 16 November 2019 at 8:19am
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Quote laydya Replybullet Posted: 16 November 2019 at 9:21am
https://imgur.com/gallery/HoQdpWi
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: Yesterday at 8:36am
Hello laydya, it's really cool. Could you perhaps refine the water texture a little more? (Not a must but would do a lot of good to the tile).
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