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Quote falz Replybullet Topic: [WIP][CC] Game TItle Screen
    Posted: 30 June 2020 at 1:07pm
My game is getting closer and closer to a stage where I want to put a playable demo out there for people to experience, so I thought I'd need to make a somewhat pretty title screen! I've never produced a piece of pixel art at this scale, so I have just been trying to apply things I've learned along the way from more traditional drawing media. I would love to hear anyone's feedback, what might look off, poorly rendered, techniques I am not using that would aid the picture, techniques I'm over-using, suggestions to improve composition. Areas that are yet to be detailed - the building entrance/just above it, the sky.

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Quote snv Replybullet Posted: 01 July 2020 at 3:24pm
I believe it is too green, even if you wanted to go for Shadow of the Colossus style. Try adding more tints.
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Quote falz Replybullet Posted: 02 July 2020 at 3:11pm
Yes, I agree the colors needed to be adjusted. I over all lowered the saturation and split the foreground from the background. I think it's better? It certainly has a different feel to it...
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Quote snv Replybullet Posted: 03 July 2020 at 2:06am
Yeah. That is far better.
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