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    Posted: 11 August 2020 at 12:23pm
Hello everyone! until now I have been eyeballing my pixels, but I want to get better! If you have the time I will really appreciate pointers and comments!
For example in this drawing I took the colors from a real picture, so the palette is a little bit boring I think, it doesnt move in hue so much.


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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 11 August 2020 at 2:18pm
The colors are fine, there is nothing wrong with a more 'natural' look :). What is it that you want to achieve with this piece? Is it nearly finished or are yo u going to add more?

I would consider changing the composition and contrast around a bit to put more focus on the zeppelin, I hadn't even noticed it at first!

And what is that odd shaped cloud in the background?
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Quote crytpo gab Replybullet Posted: 11 August 2020 at 2:36pm
Hello! I want to add a lot more clouds, But I feel the only way to do it is to keep desaturating(?) some colors of the palette. I also want to add clouds above (the odd cloud) curved or pointing at one corner to make you feel they are really far away but I am still experimenting on that. How can I achieve more contrast on the zeppeling, just by using more saturated colors?
And also I want that the clouds the zeppeling crashed into look different in some way but I can't figure out how.
Edit: I don't speak english that well! sorry if my post is hard to understand!
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