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Acorn
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    Posted: 18 August 2006 at 12:49am
I'm new, and this is the first time I've felt brave enough to show anyone something I've done.  Is it any good?  Is there any hope for me?
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 18 August 2006 at 1:13am
First off, the AA is really weird on my PJ style.

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Quote Morgan Replybullet Posted: 21 August 2006 at 2:31pm

This is quite nice. As Souly implied, you should either make the background non-transparent, or skip the outside anti-aliasing. I also think there's something a little funny about the shading on the elbow -- a little too much shadow there, I think. Other than that, I don't see anything wrong with it -- keep up the good work, and keep posting!

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Quote sinkquick Replybullet Posted: 21 August 2006 at 2:52pm
I agree with Morgan about the shading on the elbow. Try and make it a little lighter. Other than that, it's great! Keep it up!
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