Pixel Joint Forum: Octopus WIP

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Mindiell
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Topic: Octopus WIP
Posted: 09 November 2006 at 10:48am

I discovered I can draw on my PDA, so here are some quick shapes made this morning and tonight in the train. I'll work on each ones, but for now, I'll try to color the octopus one :

Other shapes are ships :

and a man (really not finished) :

For now, C+C are welcomed on the Octopus shape. I know I must work on it a little because it's difficult in the train

. i'll delete other shapes soon, just there for fun.

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Posted: 12 November 2006 at 10:55am

Well, I think I'm definitely bad on colouring... My first try on the squid is so bad :

Well, I continued on quick hand shapes on PDA during train :
cloud or rock not sure :

glass :

both movement of a zombie hand from ground, first one open, second one closed :

If you can say something on shapes, you're welcome...

Edited by Mindiell - 12 November 2006 at 3:06pm

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Pieface
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Posted: 12 November 2006 at 11:49am

The octopus needs a face tbh, it has a comical look about it

Drawings
1:What is it
2: The very bottom should be flat
3:His thumb looks completely broken
4:Lengthen the fingers a bit

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Posted: 12 November 2006 at 3:05pm

Thx Pieface, I'll try to continue on octopus, what is tbh ?

1. It's a cloud, or a rock... don't know

3 and 4 are hands, getting out from ground, like sort of zombies arms. The second one is a fist, not a hand explaining length of fingers.

I edited my post...

Edited by Mindiell - 12 November 2006 at 3:06pm

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Posted: 13 November 2006 at 9:44am

OK, i still say make the bottom of the cup flat, but i still think the thumb is too out of shape (Even if it is broken) and its a bit too long.

You really need to colour this in and then it will be easier to crit

And tbh means to be honest

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Mindiell Commander Joined: 05 October 2015 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 52	Topic: Octopus WIP Posted: 09 November 2006 at 10:48am
	I discovered I can draw on my PDA, so here are some quick shapes made this morning and tonight in the train. I'll work on each ones, but for now, I'll try to color the octopus one : Other shapes are ships : and a man (really not finished) : For now, C+C are welcomed on the Octopus shape. I know I must work on it a little because it's difficult in the train . i'll delete other shapes soon, just there for fun.
	Mindiell French n00b
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Mindiell Commander Joined: 05 October 2015 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 52	Posted: 12 November 2006 at 10:55am
	Well, I think I'm definitely bad on colouring... My first try on the squid is so bad : Well, I continued on quick hand shapes on PDA during train : cloud or rock not sure : glass : both movement of a zombie hand from ground, first one open, second one closed : If you can say something on shapes, you're welcome... Edited by Mindiell - 12 November 2006 at 3:06pm
	Mindiell French n00b
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Pieface Commander Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146	Posted: 12 November 2006 at 11:49am
	The octopus needs a face tbh, it has a comical look about it Drawings 1:What is it 2: The very bottom should be flat 3:His thumb looks completely broken 4:Lengthen the fingers a bit
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Mindiell Commander Joined: 05 October 2015 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 52	Posted: 12 November 2006 at 3:05pm
	Thx Pieface, I'll try to continue on octopus, what is tbh ? 1. It's a cloud, or a rock... don't know 3 and 4 are hands, getting out from ground, like sort of zombies arms. The second one is a fist, not a hand explaining length of fingers. I edited my post... Edited by Mindiell - 12 November 2006 at 3:06pm
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Pieface Commander Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146	Posted: 13 November 2006 at 9:44am
	OK, i still say make the bottom of the cup flat, but i still think the thumb is too out of shape (Even if it is broken) and its a bit too long. You really need to colour this in and then it will be easier to crit And tbh means to be honest
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