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Quote Rynen10K Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 4:21pm
I'm thinking it's the grate and the sizeof the motuh that's mostly ruining the design... the mouth on the others are what's making the art look so busy, so maybe he needs a bigger mouth. Here's some new lineart:
 
 
Lightened the colors, made the mouth bigger, ditched the grate (for now).
 
I'm going to tilt the smokestack back a bit too to match the perspective, and I may or may not draw in the grate... let me know what you think!
 
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Quote AdamPlays Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 5:18pm
@Xion - Hey these are pretty good in a weird deranged sort of way.  I especially like the first guy.  He has a cute face. 
 
@Rynen -  I like the grate, but I could see why you'd leave it off.   I'd like to see you add something that makes the furnace look more menacing and give it a real fiery temper.   
 
Can we please vote for 10 favorites this week???  So many good ones.   


Edited by AdamPlays - 16 June 2007 at 5:22pm
And now for something completely different...
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 5:44pm
Rynen10K, Have you tried making the last evolution a very dark blue, almost black furnace? might help adding menace.

That shirt on the last page is awesome.
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Quote Rynen10K Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 6:01pm
 
I think it's getting closer... looks like the size of the Mouth was what was causing most of the trouble.
 
 
+ AdamPlays - Yeah, I think the grate works now that the mouth is bigger :)
 
+ Jalonso - I'll give it a shot in the next update.
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Quote Xion Night Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 6:14pm
Well, hey, that didn't take as long as I expected:

Done!
...Ah, crap...the red marks on their heads look way too saturated...
But, hey, I could just say they glow...
So yeah, done!
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 6:14pm
 
Warmie        Toastie         Scorchie
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 7:39pm
OMG Xion that's awesome. :D Capital job!
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Quote Rynen10K Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 7:48pm
 
Yeah, I'm liking the darker palette. Thanks for the advice! :D
 
Should be just a few more touch-ups and it'll be ready to go!
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 7:51pm
One thing you may want to rethink is the smoke. The baby has it but the others don't. You could use smoke and soot to give further attitude to the evolutions. Think 'Koffing' the Pokemon.
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 7:55pm
I still think the big one should have smokestacks.
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Quote Anlina S. Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 8:48pm


Well this one is all done except I didn't have a theme or plan when I started pixeling and have no idea what to do for name and story.

Edit: I've been told it looks like a tentacle rape pokemon, so maybe we can work with that. XD XP


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 8:52pm


    Puvert       TeenPuzz    Oktopuzzy          

Descriptions will write themselves with those kind of names ;)


*omg, I hope you are not a hard core femenist :/


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Quote Anlina S. Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 9:02pm
Lolz. Those names are definitely at the top of my list so far.

*I'm a feminist, just not of the man-hating, omg-porn-oppresses-women variety. :P
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 9:21pm
I'm a gender equalist. :D *thumbsup*
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Quote Excalibur Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 9:34pm
Here is an Update.
What do you think? Any Ideas?
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Quote Rynen10K Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2007 at 9:44pm
Originally posted by Aleiav

I still think the big one should have smokestacks.
 
Well, he's got a big old steam engine style smokestack on his head... or do you mean smoke coming out of it?
 
I want to add smoke, but I'm like only 1 pixel away from the max height and width, so I'm not sure what to do...
 
I'll keep messing with it, hopefully I can squeeze it in.
 
 
Love the octopus thing :D
 
 
+ Excalibur - I tink the leaves on the first form need to shrink or the second form needs bigger leaf/wing things... right now, they look really big on the first form.


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Quote zlajonja Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 12:38am
Rynen10k - I still think you're missing the smoke in, if not both the other 2 then the final... maybe the burst of flames in the last one from the sides.. (aaand maybe you cut those bars of the furnace doors in the last one in half so it looks like an opened mouth... that could give it some attitude.... :) )

Alina - thumbs up

Excalibur - definetly the leaves are something to work on. Just like Rynen10K said. (I'd maybe change the perspective on the second one - of the leaves)...

and jalonso - where in the world were you when I had to make up the names of my fakemons? :D
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Quote Swenn Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 6:15am
Originally posted by Rynen10K

 
I think it's getting closer... looks like the size of the Mouth was what was causing most of the trouble.
 
 
 
Maybe you should try to make the raster in front of his mouth like theets, and then give the middle one some small theets too? And you need smoke, loads of smoke!
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 7:00am
Originally posted by zlajonja







 Dzzy          Biterzz          Pizzdof


*better late than never ;)
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Quote soda Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 9:05am
Lol, I like those names, jal.
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Quote KrixKS Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 10:34am

I don't like it very much, but it's probably the best I can do. :(
I can't think of a third evo..hm...
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 12:02pm
You can do c'mon get your thinking cap on :D
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Quote zeid Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 12:34pm
Ive been slacking a bit lately. I am not sure if I will finish this one in time because i need to sleep soon, the second evolution is all but done.

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Quote Excalibur Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 1:30pm
Looks good to me. I hope you finish it even if you don't enter it.
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Quote harkie Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 1:55pm
i hope i did this right



i enter here?

they are all grass and fire type...nobody here does the right style
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Quote Excalibur Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 1:58pm
Wow. Those are great. What am I doing wrong in the style? I can't tell. Yours look like real pokemon though.
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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 2:53pm
Bugger.. I'm not going to finish it - too late now, haven't had much computer access as I would have liked.



Started to go all weird anyway,  :/
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 5:59pm
Aww, skull. The first one wittle one is so cute.. :)
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Quote InfernoMan.EXE Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 7:54pm
I don't want to vote! There are SOO MANY GOOD WORKS!!! I know im going to lose, oh well. It was fun guess. Forced me to do somthing.. different.
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Quote skamocore Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 8:23pm
OK this is what I've got...and for some reason it is still awaiting approval


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Quote Reflects Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 8:49pm
Ah man, am lacking in ideas nd i had a hard weekend drinking and partying and forgot all about the challange LOL!
and am new to Pixeling so my work sux, and doesnt stand a chance winning but heres my idea anyways.
 
 
Did it have potential?
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Quote Excalibur Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 8:54pm
Here is my finished one. Is this where I post it?
 
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Quote soda Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 9:29pm
Originally posted by Skull

Bugger.. I'm not going to finish it - too late now, haven't had much computer access as I would have liked.



Started to go all weird anyway,  :/


That stinks that you can't finish, these are looking so cool.  Darn.
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Quote vousaimer Replybullet Posted: 21 June 2007 at 10:26pm
so is this contest over? i really want to make one...
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Quote Excalibur Replybullet Posted: 21 June 2007 at 10:27pm
Yeah. I think it is over. There is a new contest thought, you should chek it out.
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Quote vousaimer Replybullet Posted: 21 June 2007 at 11:02pm
okay sweet, i'll take a look ;)
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