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TheDarkHawk
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 17 July 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 26 |
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Right now I've finished the overcoat part. I did the muscular shape from chest to knees, and sculpted out her stocking. C+C for what I got. NOTE: There is no nudity in this, its the just the shape of it! Peace, The Dark Hawk |
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..::Naso::..
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200 |
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..............ok
iam confused to what this it, i see no lady in this pictuer =P wait....wait.....i think.................no i cant see it =/ |
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leel
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001 |
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I see the lady.. or at least the part of the lady. I'm not really sure where you're going with this, so I can't think of any good c/c so far. The only thing, if the stockings go up to her knees then the knees are way too high on her leg or her thighs aren't long enough. I'll wait for an update to give more crits.
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Godslayer
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 26 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 69 |
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Erm. Well. What appear to be the breasts are far too far out to the side. Here indecent parts are exposed as well, as far as I can see. Its hard to tell what exactly your trying to portray.
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Oi.
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Saiklor
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 230 |
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I thought that was a uni-breast in the middle
I think we need clarification here..... |
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TheDarkHawk
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 17 July 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 26 |
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Ah... I shoildn't have posted it..., just look ut for hte final in the gallery
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Monstara
Commander ![]() Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: Bulgaria Online Status: Offline Posts: 179 |
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Hey don't get offended, of course it's good that you posted it, that's the best way to improve, trust me.
I've gotten some sh*tty critique too, but it's inevitable. |
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TheDarkHawk
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 17 July 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 26 |
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aight
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Rifts
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 14 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 355 |
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there is no head the body starts from the two breasts so if u guys
cant see it thats probly why |
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leel
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001 |
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Well, I can see the woman in the image, but I don't really understand what she's gonna wear. Is the top part finished? Because right now the pink dress doesn't really make sense to me. The two sides aren't connected to each other so they really shouldn't follow her curves, but flow straight down. Don't be offended by the confusion lol, just add more to the piece to help us cc
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Bear
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 20 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 147 |
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srry but what teh fook >.>;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
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